The right to love

Description

I tried to explain why everyone has the right to love whoever they want to love. The story simply tells about the special relationship between Kangin and Leeteuk. It's written from the point of few of someone you'll get to know at the end. This oneshot is pretty short but still emotional. I hope that you'll enjoy it~

Foreword

I don't really know how I got that Idea it just popped into my head while I was watching two classmates having a bromance moment.....oh god I think if they knew that I got this idea because of them they'd probably kill me but I can't help it when they think they have to gay around infront of my eyes it is there fault when things like that happen in my head (¬‿¬)

Anyway this is the first time that I finished a story (even when it's just a oneshot) and it's the first story that I've written in english so if I made any mistakes please forgive me. I'm glad about reviews and if you want to you can tell me what I can do better next time.

 

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Chalcedon #1
Chapter 1: Making people cry is harder than making them laugh, so it takes some skill, which you clearly have. This story doesn't need a hundred or so pages to convey the feelings of the characters. Thats why the shortness of it is perfect, anything more couldn't have made it better and i think you have a sense of that.
Also i love how the narrator seemed like a creepy stalker at first but in the end it all made sense, and it was sad...
You should really write more stories i would greatly enjoy reading from you again sometime. ;)
DevilsPetal #2
Chapter 1: Oh wow that is awesome! *___*
SinfulDesires #3
Chapter 1: Beautiful.. This is amazing.. Yeah, you should write often..
Flower- #4
Chapter 1: Oh my god. You have no idea how much I've cried while I read this. This OS is perfect. You should write more often and publish your stories. They are totally worth to be read! ♥~
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