Shotgun

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We will seal our love in blood and shotgun. Now, love me or kill me.

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Foreword

Pairing                  : Jaeho/Yunjae

Genre                   : Romance, mafia.

Rating                   : PG 13

 

My first attempt writing a fic with swapping POVs… bold for Yunho, italic for Jaejoong

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TheLadySilver #1
Chapter 1: This is nicely written! I love it. Good job! :)
Cassiekinz #2
Chapter 1: This is my second time reading this... and I love it just as much!!! >0< I really like this hate/love relationship they have it's so thrilling >w< I especially love the last paragraphs <3
and I agree with mania_bi this would be an amazing movie or drama :D
JaeHoMin #3
Chapter 1: wow ...loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this how i wish it was a movie or anime
olie_unnie #4
Chapter 1: I would love to see them at the banquet party, that's happening 3 days later... XD Just saying!! Imagine them now that this happened.

I already comment this story, but I couldn't help myself from reading it again. LOVE IT!
yunjaemania #5
Chapter 1: omonaaaaaaa!!!!! So beautiful!! I almost cried, not because of the story but beacuse you wrote this so beautiful.

Breath taking...

I won't ask for a sequel, because this is perfect. But I'm going to read it of course if you made one.


You went upward and claimed my lips in another deep kiss. The pressure of trigger on my stomach went stronger and I let out a small moan into your mouth. You pulled away for breath, my lips in final.

You turned away towards exit door, without even giving me a final look. Without final words. Yet they didn’t matter.

I was alive, that was what mattered.





“So you choose to love me instead of killing me, Yunho?”

I stopped right in front of exit door. ____ that arrogant voice. I opened the door and walked out, leaving him at the rooftop by himself.

The answer was clear already, stop pretending.




kyaaaaa, I love the those 2 last pharagraph, especially the last sentence.
yunjaemania #6
oh ini ya??? kyaa....
jaeshipper #7
Chapter 1: i like this!! omo!! this will be very good series!! uwaaa!!! i want more!! >,< pwease author-shii.. pweeeeaaaasssseeeeeeee~~~~~~~
jiji-yoyo-leo #8
Chapter 1: wahhh this is good. both side are strong and tough man. make this into series, please >,<
olie_unnie #9
Chapter 1: This is just sooooo GOODDDD!! I'm officially Speechless.
You have me wishing for more! Kyyyaaaa!! That was very hot, i must say. Your one-shot is amazing. The love and hate is superb. That Kept me on my toes. I was thinking "You better not pull that trigger. You better kiss the crap out of him."
4everxd #10
Chapter 1: asfdhajkdhgfsdhfgsdfhg I love that image and your fanfic!!! Wahh this is so good! You write amazing <3 I love thiiissss <3<3
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