Chapter 2: Update~~~~

Chapter 2: Getting accepted into a queenka group is a step forward for Jieun to get settled into the school environment. At the same time, she has the opportunity to make her move on Daehyun in plotting to get back at him. The queenkas are in the position to be privileged of getting close to the kingkas. It'll start to get interesting from here. If I was in Jieun's position, I would've felt disgusted seeing Daehyun making out with another girl in the hallway.

"Fastly" isn't a real word. "Quickly" or "hurriedly" could've been used instead. It should be "sit" instead of "seat" since it's used as a verb in one of the sentences.

Chapter 1: "Once a player, always a player." Daehyun seems to be the kind of person who doesn't change at all. Because of him, she's changed into a different person in the form of revenge--to make him regret breaking up with her. This reminds me of a recent K-Pop song by Ailee.

"Breath" is a noun. It should be "breathe" since it seems that you're using it as a verb.

When one realizes that it's not worth it to continue wallowing over the person who hurt him/her, it's time to move on. It'll be an interesting development to see the changes that she'll go through in rising above her hardship.

Chapter 2: Wow Daehyun making out with HyunA... Gah i can't imagine it

Chapter 2: Update soon^^

Chapter 2: sounds great! Update soon! Can't wait for the next update..^^

Chapter 2: woah.. Update a.s.a.p cingu-ah :D

Chapter 1: This is very interesting ^^ hope you can update soon

Chapter 1: seems interesting... update soon... :D