So.....don't know the difference between the "description" and the "foreword"....so I'm just gonna do say that....i just fixed all the formatting of my first chapter...cause i originally wrote it on my ipod and it became a gaint clump of confusion....this is also my first fanfic...so constructive critisim is always welcome....and yeah thanks to the subscribers who toughed out reading the giant blob....

Also warning...i tend to be overly detailed, and make giant run on sentences...tell me if I do that too much....also this will probably be a slower read cause i'm just making up plot as i go along. :P thanks~ please enjoy~