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Summary: AU. The two boys paused, and watched each other, their hair whipping about them violently. They took each others' hands, giving each other one final gesture of affection, before they took the plunge and descended into that oasis of light in a desert of blackness.

Main Characters: CNU, Jinyoung, Gongchan (unlikely to appear until about Chapter 5 - to be updated)

Side Characters: Sandeul, Baro (will appear much, much later in the fic). Other idols will play very small roles.

Pairings: Shinyoung (CNU + Jinyoung), Shinchan (CNU + Gongchan)

Genre: Sci-Fi / Supernatural, friendship, coming-of-age, implied romance

Rating: PG-13 (Violence)

Foreword

This is my first story about B1A4, though it isn't my first fanfiction. I do not want to spoil this story for you so I won't reveal most of the details I have planned for this story, except that there will be supernatural themes in it and certain dark issues being portrayed that you may not necessarily understand if you're too young.

I'm not sure how well this will be received but if it's received well, I'll add a poster later. I hope to receive feedback about this story as I'm an aspiring writer, though not necessarily a fiction writer :) If you have any suggestions, you're more than welcome to tell me about them because I'm interested in hearing them, even if I do not use all of them in this fic.

I must iterate in this fic that the content of this story will become increasingly dark as the fic goes on as I have many twists and turns planned. There will however be no ual content or outright gore so as long as you're above the age of 14 or 15 it should be fine for you to read. If there are any triggers in future chapters, I'll be sure to mark them out accordingly.

Thank you for reading :)

P.S. I post this on my LJ so if you like you can read it there instead.

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Neulji #1
I really like this story. The idea is something different and I also like the characters, especially Dongwoo. He seems very peaceful, I hope he'll regain his voice back. And I also like Gongchan in this fic, he seems so evil^^
Somehow I wonder why Jinyoung helped him and spend so much time on him. You wrote that he thinks that Dongwoo looked beautiful, will this kinda turn into an one-sided love?
Reading the foreword you wrote something about 'Supernatural' so I'm alredy curious how it will turn out. :-) [Sorry about my bad english >.>]
cnusbear #2
Oh, if you're asking some suggestions...
Idk what's your plan about Dongwoo's characterization... but I think he's too innocent?
"He would have shared his food with them if they asked" this line though, kind of bothers me? It sounds too kind, so unreal.

But, omg they way you described his condition,
"as he hadn’t eaten in two days since he only ate every three days to save what little food he had. Furthermore, his joints were frozen since he had sat in the cold for hours on end, wearing only a thin shirt that was torn in places and a pair of shorts that were far too small for him."
OH MY HEART.

But, umm, yeah, I think Dongwoo's too innocent, but maybe you already had a plan on it?
I'm anticipating this fic! :D
cnusbear #3
I've read this one on LJ though, but idk, I feel more comfortable to leave a comment here lol

ANYWAY,
OMG FINALLY MY OT3 FIC, SHINCHAN AND SHINYOUNG ASKCZXMVNBZXKJGVSZVB

I had mixed feelings when reading chapter 1, it was fairly dark with Dongwoo being a homeless guy (I guess?) welps, I'm achingly curious about his past mzxvbzxcnvb
And omg those mean people ):
He let his hair grew long since he had no money, boy, he was a fashionista by nature then what is this I don't even-
........I almost shed a tear when those mean people robbed his savings I.......
"He opened his mouth in protest, but all that came out of it were pathetic whines" WHATDONTTELLMEHEIS............

DO CONTINUE THIS STORY JUSEYO ;____;

ps: i like how you used CNU's real name
pps: but I think it'd be better if the others too (Chanshik, Sunwoo, Junghwan)
ppps: just saying though, it's up to your writing style O:
pppps: FIRST SUBSCRIBER \o/
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