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"If there was an opportunity, why not take it?"

 

I've been wanting to write a chaptered scenario for a while so here's my take at it. It is a Kai x You x Sehun scenario, and I will be using an OC name for the girl since I find that it will be easier to write it that way. Bae Haneul is the name.

 

I hope it'll be okay if I take my time between each chapter, so please be patient with me ;A;

Will decorate the page tomorrow since it is 1:40AM at the moment and I am tying this half asleep uhuhu

 

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Ahh I'm sorry for taking a little break with this one, I'll get back to it soon, I promise ;~;

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liviya #1
Chapter 7: Ohh please at least say the date when you are going to write next chapter please.curiosity kills me please
pinkpanther1017
#2
Chapter 7: So Sehun does know something important. I'm guessing Jongin is about to find out...
pinkpanther1017
#3
Chapter 6: I'll admit that I am confused. I assume Kai is talking about Haneul, but the way she responds is very distant because she thinks he's talking about another girl. Yet either he doesn't pick up on it, or he's taking it as her way of indirectly telling him that she understands his side and is kind of forgiving him. Or maybe there's something else going on but I have no idea what.

But yeah, I actually am curious to learn more about Sehun so looking forward to next update!
pinkpanther1017
#4
Chapter 5: Alright, so I guess I see why she wasn't weirded out by Jongin, but now the question of why she doesn't remember him at all is still ringing in my head >.<

But her and Sehun have a cute relationship ^_^ Just wondering what Sehun was thinking when he was introduced to Jongin. Does he know about his and Haneul's past and feels threatened by him?
dyonamite
#5
Chapter 4: I think she has a split personality, my gut feeling tells me so.
fanfic_lover
#6
Chapter 4: can see Kai being upset when he finds out...:(
pinkpanther1017
#7
Chapter 4: Okay, I was so confused with her behavior in this story. But then I find out that she doesn't even remember/know Kai. Wasn't she creeped out that he knew her name without asking and that he knew so much about her?
confessionsong
#8
Chapter 4: WhUUUuuuuuuuut.... Did she like lose her memory of sumthing? Is she not who Kai was looking for??? O.o so confused right now. Poor Kai. He doesn't even kno she has no clue who he is
pinkpanther1017
#9
Chapter 3: Oh wow, Hanuel must have changed quite a bit if she wasn't recognizable by Kai at first glance. Although he must have changed some too if she didn't recognize him either, unless she couldn't get a good look at him because she was blinded by the light. But I almost think it's fate that Kai was assigned to the fashion department where Haneul is studying. Anyways, looking forward to more :)
pinkpanther1017
#10
Chapter 2: You're story sounds interesting and I like your writing :) I'm a bit confused about some things, but hopefully it gets clearer in the future. Looking forward to your next update ^_^