Baby, don't cry.

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It's my first time writing fluff~ Please give me comments on how to improve! Thank you!

Foreword

Cut into two parts, because the first one is a tad too long? I'm trying to write fluff so give me a comment on how to improve so I can write a better ending. Thank you! x

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ismary666 #1
Chapter 2: So fluffy and cute and sweet, god, they are perfect for each other, although they are the crybabies, jejejejjee.
esmeberta #2
Chapter 2: Wow...I loved it...it was really cute :)
eunhaekaisooftw #3
Chapter 2: odg u write fluff . it's fluff ! AND FOR A FIRST TIMER THIS IS MORE THAN GOOD :) gahhh
LaLa_Land_86 #4
Chapter 2: Awww...they so cute and fluffy. ♥ and, yeah, no one else matters, just the two of them in their world~
I really like how they express their feelings towards each other here..so no misunderstandings. :)
Hisana #5
Chapter 2: new reader of your stories here !!!!!! omg..that was beautiful ..serioulsy ...perfect two shot <3
fishyeknom #6
Chapter 2: very beautiful 2-shot :D Eunhyuk is the (new) leader ^^ he want to treat every member equally :) so Hae fells rejected xD Hyuk fells so sorry about that :'( in the end, it's Hae that comforts Hyuk <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 I love it!!!
fiezaliyana #7
Chapter 1: Nice fic.. :) really love the childish hae and protective eunhyuk.. keep up the good work.. love you.. ;D
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