What is happening?

Beauty is never the question...
It was another day of school. Everything went as per normal. Except... Your POV: Something strange is really going on. Last week those bullies didnt come to attack me. Today, both the bullies and the queenkas are not preying on me. I should be feeling happy but... Wait, someone is helping me, to get rid of them. But who? No one POV: You went to search for Sehun. You found him sitting in his classroom, as usual drawing sketches of inanimated stuff. " Sehun-ah, those bullies and queenkas did not do anything to me today, yesterday, and the day before yesterday. Did you do something to make them stop? " you asked, imaginery question marks are appearing on top of your head. " Nope. I didnt do anything. Thats great! Im happy for you that those bullies and queenkas are not disturbing you anymore!" he squeak. If only you paid more attention to his face, a small grin was plastered onto his face. You daid thanks and bid goodbye before rushing out of hos classroom. You were caught up with your thoughts that you didnt realise someone was in front of you and bumped against him...
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Hehe... Sorry if you are getting confuse with the story because i had to update some chapters again due to some error in the plot. Sorry!

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Kellybby11 #1
Chapter 20: You must update. I command you to UPDATE !!!!!!!!!
shoutsandmurmurs #2
Chapter 14: Haha thanks for clearing that up. Yeah, I was super confused because I say that the story got updated but it was chapters I had already read!! Anyways, I hope you update soon! ㅅ.ㅅ
Dohyeonju
#3
Chapter 1: hi dear:D I have hard time to read. Can you give some space or paragraph.. :( i'm sorry but if the story combine all together, made me dizzy
CaramelsDreamer #4
Chapter 14: Update soon:)^^ I like alr:)
shoutsandmurmurs #5
Woah~ This story is getting really interesting!! I can't wait for the next chapter! (^_^)
-hopefullee
#6
Chapter 2: "... a group of amgry students" **angry :P i'm just being an annoying girl now, aren't i? xD

haha omg xD Singaporean accent xD 'dare to stare is it?' xDDDDDD wheee~~~ i'm being a hyperactive person now :P
-hopefullee
#7
Chapter 1: 'can't they just find another nerd to play on" **pick on :P

"... their taunting and craps" **crap :P

"Don they feel..." **Don't :P

'I' captilasation :P

"Why cant anybody..." **can't :P

"to male things worse, ..." **make :P

i think you know all the punctuation things haha xD


"you just let them swipe you here and there," i think shove is better? haha (:

"the person that belongs to voice quickly rush up to you" sounds abit weird >< the owner of the voice? haha

"you sigh in relief" **sighed. but if you're writing in present tense then o.O

"and you can just leave with it?" **live :P

"I could only look at him..." i thought it's in general pov?

haha sorry. i sound so mean now >< but i guess you're typing this out on your phone right? cos your paragraphing is not coming out... lol

but not bad!! ^~^ just need to fix paragraphing and some spelling/capitalisations/puntuations mistakes (:

FIGHTING :DDDDDDD
-hopefullee
#8
"wait.. if his not new here," He's** haha xD and the captilazations and punctuations got some wrong :P
Lisa_lp10 #9
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^