Friends?

Beauty is never the question...
" Kim Jongin, how long are you going to sulk for?" Silence. " Jongi-" " AS LONG AS I WANT. UNTIL HYUNGS PATCH BACK UP WITH SHINYEONG UNNIE I WONT TALK NOR SMILE NOR LAUGH NOR ACKNOWLEDGE YOU LUHAN HYUNG. SO HYUNG BETTER GO NOW AND THINK OF WAYS TO GET SHINYEONG UNNIE BACK," He screamed. His breathing started to become irrational due to his screaming. I laughed at his cuteness. " WHY ARE YOU LAUGHING AT ME HYUNG? IS IT THAT FUNNY?" I nodded. " it is funny cause your getting upset for no reasons. And for my little jongin's information, hyung and unnie are back together!" He stared at me. " hyung are you serious? Please don lie to me, hyung?" I shooked my head. I dialed Shinyeongs number and made him talk to her. / "Unnie, are you and Luhan hyung back together? For real?"/ His eyes sarted to grow bigger than normal. He cut the phone call and quickly gave me a big hug. I chuckled. " Now where did the muscular and charismatic Jongin go to?" i teased. He immediately stand up right. " thats great hyung. Its good that your back together now," in his manlier tone. I yanked his head. " OUCH! HYING WHAT WAS THAT FOR!" " For screaming at me the other day!" He smiled. " Friends?" He shooked his head. " Why not?!" He laughed, " We are not friends, hyung. We are brothers for life." we smiled . " YEAH! SO NOW SINCE LUHAN HYUNG AND JONGIN ARE BACK AS BROTHERS AGAIN WE SHOULD HAVE TWO CELEBRATIONS AT THE SAME TIME. WOULDNT IT BE FUN!" Chanyeol screamed. " YAH CHANYEOL! WHEN DID YOU CAME HERE? AND WHATS THAT SHOUTING FOR?!" both jonging and i screamed. " HE WANTS TO DIE THATS WHY. HIS TIRED OF LIVING I GUESS!" Baekhyun screamed at started chasing Chanyeol again. " Those brats!"
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Hehe... Sorry if you are getting confuse with the story because i had to update some chapters again due to some error in the plot. Sorry!

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Kellybby11 #1
Chapter 20: You must update. I command you to UPDATE !!!!!!!!!
shoutsandmurmurs #2
Chapter 14: Haha thanks for clearing that up. Yeah, I was super confused because I say that the story got updated but it was chapters I had already read!! Anyways, I hope you update soon! ㅅ.ㅅ
Dohyeonju
#3
Chapter 1: hi dear:D I have hard time to read. Can you give some space or paragraph.. :( i'm sorry but if the story combine all together, made me dizzy
CaramelsDreamer #4
Chapter 14: Update soon:)^^ I like alr:)
shoutsandmurmurs #5
Woah~ This story is getting really interesting!! I can't wait for the next chapter! (^_^)
-hopefullee
#6
Chapter 2: "... a group of amgry students" **angry :P i'm just being an annoying girl now, aren't i? xD

haha omg xD Singaporean accent xD 'dare to stare is it?' xDDDDDD wheee~~~ i'm being a hyperactive person now :P
-hopefullee
#7
Chapter 1: 'can't they just find another nerd to play on" **pick on :P

"... their taunting and craps" **crap :P

"Don they feel..." **Don't :P

'I' captilasation :P

"Why cant anybody..." **can't :P

"to male things worse, ..." **make :P

i think you know all the punctuation things haha xD


"you just let them swipe you here and there," i think shove is better? haha (:

"the person that belongs to voice quickly rush up to you" sounds abit weird >< the owner of the voice? haha

"you sigh in relief" **sighed. but if you're writing in present tense then o.O

"and you can just leave with it?" **live :P

"I could only look at him..." i thought it's in general pov?

haha sorry. i sound so mean now >< but i guess you're typing this out on your phone right? cos your paragraphing is not coming out... lol

but not bad!! ^~^ just need to fix paragraphing and some spelling/capitalisations/puntuations mistakes (:

FIGHTING :DDDDDDD
-hopefullee
#8
"wait.. if his not new here," He's** haha xD and the captilazations and punctuations got some wrong :P
Lisa_lp10 #9
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^