Secret Admirer

Beauty is never the question...
Your POV: " Sehun, please im begging you. Just tell me something about Luhan!" i begged. He just shook that small head of his. I sighed in defeat. When his being stubborn, theres no point in begging. " All i can tell you is that his your secret admirer." i stared at him and burst out laughing. " How can he be my secret admirer? Im just a-" " Shin Yeong, how many times must i tell you not to call yourself with that title. Stop. Youre not a nerd. Remember that." i looked down and nodded." i know that Sehun. I know and ill remember." the bell rang and i took my leave.  Sehun POV: Haha Shin Yeong ah... Just wait a little longer..  Luhan hyung is still planning out. Soon you will be the happiest girl in SM High.   Your POV: i walked out of Sehun's classroom, still thinking about that guy Luhan when a his voice called to me. I turned around and there he was running towards me." Are you going for recess? Shall we go together?" Seriously, he doesnt get tired of smiling does he? I was hesistant but he shook his head " Nope im not taking no as an answer so lets go!" He took me by my hand and led me towards the canteen. Once we stepped into the canteen all eyes were on me. The girls were staring daggers at me while the guys were just plainly looking. I hide my face away from the embarrassment. Luban made me sat between him and Sehun. I looked at him and mouth " when did you get here?" and he just gave me that smile again. " Shinyeong, so these are alll my friends. Jongin, Kyungsoo, Baekhyun, Chanyeol, Tao, Kris, Suho, Lay,Xiumin, Chen and your friend Sehun. We are called Exo." Everyone started introducing which made me blushed at their friendliness. Jongin i supposed said, " Anybody whose a good friend of Luhan hyung and Sehun are a good friend of Exo" Everyone else nodded. I smiled. We then started to eat while exo start to show some stuff about themselves. I was amazed at how talented they were. Of course the were in dmfact the kingkas of SM High. The bell rang and i excused my self and headed for class.
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Hehe... Sorry if you are getting confuse with the story because i had to update some chapters again due to some error in the plot. Sorry!

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Kellybby11 #1
Chapter 20: You must update. I command you to UPDATE !!!!!!!!!
shoutsandmurmurs #2
Chapter 14: Haha thanks for clearing that up. Yeah, I was super confused because I say that the story got updated but it was chapters I had already read!! Anyways, I hope you update soon! ㅅ.ㅅ
Dohyeonju
#3
Chapter 1: hi dear:D I have hard time to read. Can you give some space or paragraph.. :( i'm sorry but if the story combine all together, made me dizzy
CaramelsDreamer #4
Chapter 14: Update soon:)^^ I like alr:)
shoutsandmurmurs #5
Woah~ This story is getting really interesting!! I can't wait for the next chapter! (^_^)
-hopefullee
#6
Chapter 2: "... a group of amgry students" **angry :P i'm just being an annoying girl now, aren't i? xD

haha omg xD Singaporean accent xD 'dare to stare is it?' xDDDDDD wheee~~~ i'm being a hyperactive person now :P
-hopefullee
#7
Chapter 1: 'can't they just find another nerd to play on" **pick on :P

"... their taunting and craps" **crap :P

"Don they feel..." **Don't :P

'I' captilasation :P

"Why cant anybody..." **can't :P

"to male things worse, ..." **make :P

i think you know all the punctuation things haha xD


"you just let them swipe you here and there," i think shove is better? haha (:

"the person that belongs to voice quickly rush up to you" sounds abit weird >< the owner of the voice? haha

"you sigh in relief" **sighed. but if you're writing in present tense then o.O

"and you can just leave with it?" **live :P

"I could only look at him..." i thought it's in general pov?

haha sorry. i sound so mean now >< but i guess you're typing this out on your phone right? cos your paragraphing is not coming out... lol

but not bad!! ^~^ just need to fix paragraphing and some spelling/capitalisations/puntuations mistakes (:

FIGHTING :DDDDDDD
-hopefullee
#8
"wait.. if his not new here," He's** haha xD and the captilazations and punctuations got some wrong :P
Lisa_lp10 #9
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^