Frosty Embrace [Oneshot]

Description

Looking out from underneath, fractured moonlight on the sea. Reflections still look the same to me, as before I went under. And it's peaceful in the deep.

In the arms of the ocean, so sweet and so cold, and all this devotion I never knew at all, and the crashes are Heaven, for a sinner released, and the arms of the ocean, deliver me.

Foreword

Genre: romance, pain, regret

This oneshot is an entry in Exquisite Round 1

Authors Note: English isn't my first language so please understand if I have very limited vocabulary. Second, the storyline is inspired from the song 'Never Let Me Go' by Florence and the Machine. I won't follow the music video's story because I have another one in mind. Even though it's inspired, the plot wasn't copied from someone else's. If you see someone so related with mine, please consider it as a coincidence.

Update 1/11/13: This story has been reviewed by baconator of

˙·٠•●♥ sιмρℓү sωεεт яεvιεω&ɠяɑρнιɕ sнσρρε ♥●•٠·˙. View the the review here. :)

 

 

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emzybbz
#1
Chapter 1: Tears are rolling down my face now, this is fantastic!
DeullieSa34 #2
Chapter 2: nice story ever:-*:-*:-*:-*
jinchicken
#3
Chapter 2: OTL my heart broke to pieces otl otl otl. You wrote the story beautifully! I love the way you write it ;------;
ron337 #4
Chapter 2: No!!! This is just heart breaking.. ・゜・(つД`)・゜・

And yes! Alternate happy ending please!!!
EXOternity
#5
Chapter 1: wow. even though you say english isn't you first language, you write the story beautifully. :)
Park_HyeSun #6
Chapter 1: Nicely written. Suicide is never the solution.
donttouchmychicken
#7
Chapter 1: Awww! So sad!!!
AlwaysWithGyu
#8
Chapter 1: Aww... Too late for regrets now ><
seoriNbarolovers
#9
Chapter 1: Aaaaaawwwww!!! This story is too sad, It made me cry!!! :""""(
seoriNbarolovers
#10
Update soon! Can't wait!