Don't Leave

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Na Young, feeling lost, uncared for, and meaningless, took her own life. Daehyun wished he could have done something to stop her. He wished he could have showed her how loved she really was, and how important she was to him. He missed her so badly...

Sometimes, when one wishes desperately enough and truly cares for another, they get another chance. They get a chance to make things different for the one they lost, to make their last moments the best that they could have. There are even times when, if the person's will is strong enough, the future can be changed.

Daehyun is one lucky enough to get another chance, and he works hard to make better memories with Na Young. The closer the date of her death gets, though, the question comes to mind.

Can he change the future?

~This is an entry for the Sky Is The Limit Writing Contest (http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/264824/the-sky-is-the-limit-writing-contest-open-bigbang-infinite-shinee-snsd-writingcontest-exo-bap). You guys should check it out! ^^

This story was inspired by "In Heaven" by JYJ. The song influenced the story, as did the video. I'm using the same concept, but with different characters, events, and whatnot. Will the ending be different? We'll have to see. ;)

The Greyskies Review and Beta Shop reviewed "Don't Leave," and here is the link if you're interested in reading the review. :) ~> http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/305975/1 WARNING! It does have spoilers.

The wonderful poster and background was created by the Momopanda Graphic Shop (http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/297730/momopanda-graphic-shop-open-poster-request-shop-posters-postershop-graphicanddesign-graphicandposter). :) You should definitely check them out! ^^

Foreword

He had been so busy with work lately, that he hadn't noticed the signs. Daehyun knew that she was hurting after losing her parents, and things only got worse for her when the company she worked for let her go, but he never thought... He never thought that the pain would drive her so far. He never dreamed he would lose her like that, in such a cruel way. Now that she was gone, he realized there had been so many instances in which he neglected her, and that maybe if he had been around more often and paid more attention, then maybe... Maybe Na Young would still be alive.

What was he to do, though? She was already gone, and had been for months. There was nothing he could do to quel the guilt that ate at his heart now.

"Oppa, you have something you would like to do more than anything, right? What is it?"

The child blinked innocently at Daehyun, waiting patiently for his answer. The blonde gave her a small, sad smile and dropped his gaze. "What I want to do more than anything..." Na Young's smiling face had popped into his mind immediately. "I'd like to spend more time with someone, and be there for her because I wasn't when she needed me before. I want to make it up to her..." He sighed. "But that's impossible now."

"Remember, Oppa," The young girl smiled, her eyes twinkling. "That nothing is impossible."

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This story now has a poster and a background, courtesy of the Momopanda Graphic Shop. What do you guys think~? ;D

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wishful
#1
Hi there, sweetie! :3

Happy to say that we finally finished your review over at WTS. Please don't forget to comment and credit!
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/201538/178
MissyQ
#2
Chapter 2: aw this was just, this was just amazing ! <3 ! THUMBS UP! ~
user555 #3
Chapter 1: i cried adter the first few paragraphs howwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww lol thanks!!
ShinAhYoung
#4
Chapter 2: I cried , this story LIKE "Severely by Ft-Island"
aegyo_bom
#5
Chapter 2: Thanks for telling me about your story!
The open ending is great! right now im imagining wats gonna happen in the future lol ^.^
purplekpop
#6
Chapter 2: January 3rd is my birthday and gah
my heart

the little girl is so mysterious
oh goodness
she's basically telling Daehyun to keep at it, not to stop loving her

GAH DADDY DAE
I CANNOT
all my feels
-bows to you-
purplekpop
#7
Chapter 1: this is so good
oh my gosh
my baby
D:
i cant
oh my heart
MY POOR DAEHYUN
I honestly think the girl shouldn't have
i mean she had no reason
she missed Daehyun? talk it out D: oh my heart
hamSamizzle
#8
Chapter 2: Whoa this is so good! I really loved it and I'm glad Daehyun took that second chance to heart! hehe good luck!
Shadow_Dagger
#9
Chapter 2: Gosh, this was great, Dongsaeng! With the ending, it's very open. My imagination keeps on wandering to other senarios!
Like what if she dies again! Or what if Daehyun dies! Or their baby!

You did really good with this! I loved it! The little girl was kid of creepy. I mean, with the whole disappearing thing! It reminds me of a show or movie or something like that.
But this was brilliant!
Great job Dongsaeng!
Deewlici0us
#10
Chapter 2: D'awww, that's so cute ;u; Very good job! *clapclap*
But I got a little bit confused at the end... Who was the little girl? Oo