That Girl

Description

The Story talks about kind, fights for justice, smart, strong-headed girl named Racheal who has a horrible childhood, and a obnoxious, full of himself guy named Ray whose the son of a father who owns this big company named "TYNL". These two meet when Ray was by the ocean looking at the view when suddenly Racheal came along riding on her bike to deliver take-out and accidently pushes him into the ocean. Unfortunately, Ray does not know how to swim. Racheal jumps in and rescue him. Still unconscious, Racheal called the ambulance. Now Ray wonders who this mystery girl is. 4th year into Eddington high school (a school for rich kids), and school starts once again!!! Ray is in a horrible crummy mood as he is back to school, Racheal, on the other hand is so excited and is running for school president!!! As she is handing out flyers, one flyer slips out of her hands and land on Ray's FACE!!!! DUN DUN DUN!!!!!! One bad mood rich guy plus a strong-headed girl who fight for justice, ya you KNOW things are about to get ugly. The two characters yell SOOO loud at each other the school principle himself comes down and punishes them into doing cleaning duty after school for the next 4 months!!! Will Ray ever find out, the one who saved him was the one who got him into doing cleaning duty?!?!?

Peek Preview: Ryan meets Racheal and for him its love at first sight, (even though Racheal is kinda a dork at school=) but as Ray starts to get to knoe Racheal..... Hmmmm Love? LOVE TRIANGLE!!!! Racheal's heart will be given to who? Read to find out!!!

Foreword

Narrator- Racheal

Setting- School, Japan, Home

Characters- Racheal, Ray, Ellie (Racheal's childhood friend), Drake(the enemy and the son of the man whose ememies with Ray's father)

Personalities:

Racheal- Aka the "good girl" who feels the need to fight for justice when she sees it! (somtimes that could be a problem...)

Ray- Good for nothing spoiled brat, whose obnoxious, but is actually very lonely. (he is FORCED to be the successor of his dad's company)

Ellie- reliable, caring, shy.......... (Back when racheal and ellie were young, Racheal always comes to her rescue from bullies)

Drake- a smidge obnoxious, hates Ray because his first love, like Ray and would never look at Drake, cunning, and a little unknown?

 Ryan- Ray's Older Brother.........seems to have a thing for Racheal.... Hmmmm

Jessica- The so called "B1tch" if u knoe what i mean? Ya it's obvious she's trying to get Ray. Ya u can't produce a story without one of these girls =)

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Dailycommenter 98 streak #1
As I am trying to find an old story on here but I cannot remember the title so I am going through all the story links I found this sounds interesting and has a nice description
-ximini #2
Are you going to continue this?
SLAMWriter
#3
Update Soon
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