Cause it's you

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I'm writing my first FanFiction. So please help me since im not familiar with everything here. And im open to any comments and suggestions. Thanks

 

 

AND BTW, credits to the rightful owners of the images i used. THANKS!

Foreword

Kim Hyoyeon, a cheerful lass. Living a simple life. Wants simple things. To live happily. Dreams to love truly and be loved dearly.

 

Yoon Doojoon is a martyr lover who would do anything for her girlfriend, Gyuri.

Gyuri, is a sensitive lover. Though his feelings for Doojoon are real.

 

But with a sudden change of emotions, Doojoon has set his eyes (and heart) to Hyoyeon.

 

How will this love triangle come to an end?

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littlehyo #1
Chapter 5: deabak!!
love it..rarely people call dj as joon..hehe
nice story:-)
August8 #2
Chapter 5: Whaaa great! hehe.. i am hoping for doohyo fics :)
inowhavealife #3
Hi, Nin! Sorry I have only commented tonight. ^^ First of all, I didn't expect this to end so soon. Really, I didn't. Yeah, the flow and development is kind of fast. Second, you sometimes switch from one tense to another. Stick to one tense only. :) Third, to add more inputs for the readers' imagination, you can add more descriptions of what the characters doing. And not just go with only dialogues.

The third one is just a suggestion. You can find your own writing style if you continue making stories.

The story was fine for a first time. Trust me, my first story is way worse than yours. XD That's all! Have fun writing!
haruma2911 #4
doohyo...
update more..
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