I’m OK, baby are you ok?

I’m OK, baby are you ok?

(A/N: Everything in italics and in different colors are the lyrics of 4minute’s song ‘I’m OK’ http://www.4-minute.com/forums/topic/14422-im-ok/page__view__findpost__p__154942)
(A/N2: Blue=thoughts; Purple=speech)

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‘We need to talk…’ were the words that started this situation…

We've been like this for an hour now

Without saying anything, with no expressions on our faces

After this long time, we just can’t seem to find any more words…

We've changed a lot, our love too

We've drifted too far apart, our relationship too

I move my eyes from the floor to you and you’re already looking at me. Your eyes are wet…

We have to stop seeing each other – I muttered feeling my voice cracking – Even though it will be difficult

You swallow with difficulty. A tear rolls down your cheek but you don’t clean it.

You have to meet a better woman – a tear rolls down my cheek too – A woman who's much better than I am

You shake your head. ‘No’ you say in a deep voice.

It'll be just a while, you'll forget me soon – my voice is betraying me – It'll be better than it is now

You shake your head again. ‘You know I won’t forget you…’

My hands are shaking

It's OK if you hate me – I let out before standing up the chair – …forget me

You’re not responding so I'll leave first

‘No…!’

Don't grab my hand

The feeling of your skin burns me inside…

Don't have that sad look on your face – your eyes are swollen… – My heart is starting to hurt more

‘Then don’t go’ your voice is deep and heavy again.

It's better if we stop and break up now – I sigh – It'll end up like this again anyway

Silence…

You know it too…right?

I'm OK – I keep repeating inside my head.

I know I’m OK but baby, are you OK?

I’m feeling suffocated, and our love is too

It ends here now – I take my purse and walk away without looking back…

I’m crying and I know you’re crying too but it’s for the best…

I'm OK, I know I am. I hope you can be OK too…

Even though there's no more us and I won't be able to see you anymore, I know I'm OK

It's OK if you hate me

Don't hold it in anymore, forget me…

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tiarashinyoora #1
Chapter 1: ough...it's really sad...
i think it will be nice if the story continues..;(
AngelikaStruk #2
Chapter 1: Wow so unique I like it!! Its sad tough x.x
Keep writing :)
gyne4x4ever
#3
Chapter 1: awww it's so sad :(
I love the way you combined the lyric and the story~
nice story! (:
CottonCookie
#4
Chapter 1: Absolutely adore how you incorporated the lyrics into the speech and thoughts, I'm ok is such a beautiful song with such sad lyrics. The story captures the essence of the song and despite the length of this, the emotions of both characters can be felt. Great job. :) Sunggyu and Jiyoon <3