it's a million grey areas, don't you find?

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written for this contest

playlist

950 words

kaisoo

pg[-13]

 

Foreword

"Life isn't black and white. It's a million grey areas, don't you find?"

                                   -- Ridley Scott

 

 

 

 

 

 

also inspired by this prompt, which is actually a riddle:

 

"In marble walls as white as milk,

Lined with skin as soft as silk,

Within a fountain crystal clear,

A golden apple doth appear.

No doors there are to this stronghold,

Yet thieves break in and steal the gold."

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vainilla #1
Chapter 1: like i said your word vomit it's breathtaking hahaha
Kaosuhime #2
Chapter 1: OMG /sobbing/ I can't, word vomit really is the best, it's all raw feeling and beautiful words all woven together until it becomes something so real and deep... I'm sorry. I just love Kaisoo and this is great. I WANT YOUR WORDS. Wonderful job~
JEONJUNGK00K #3
Chapter 1: Your word vomit is always so special ;; its just so beautiful beautiful beautiful and beautiful <3
sweetlemons #4
Chapter 1: why is your word vomit so precious. WHY. THIS IS FREAKING AMAZING AND WHAT YOU DID THIS IN 30 MINUTES. Stahp killing me with these angsty kaisoo feels.

I love everything about this but the last few paragraphs got me and r/n i'm just in a daze, lost in my kaisoo imagination.

and i ____ at riddles because my answers always sound stupid.
XmaknaeluverX #5
Chapter 2: omg hahahahahahahahahahahaha
i can't breathe hAlp
why are you updating on this one tho? lol
i love ferrets and chanyeol and rachel. the end.
XmaknaeluverX #6
Chapter 1: wow you just keep ruining my life, rachel ㅠㅠ
that was really good and wth you wrote it in 30 mins? i take like 2 days to write a paragraph ugh
i really like the plot and the soft outline around letting people in becuase i have problems with that too...
the ending gives really vivid images, i imagined kyungsoo just falling down in this empty, white space of total nothingness with blank eyes. rolling, spinning, falling slowly with his heart in his hand. it doesn't beat, though, it's just there staining his hand and his perfectly white shirt.

what am i doing omg im sorry i always think too much when commenting (´Д` ) but you write amazingly ok

and i think the answer is an egg? white walls, soft skin, clear fountain ... idek lol
kasilo #7
Chapter 1: omg. You wrote this in just 30 min. It is so good. The way you express yourself is like magic. You do it so well and I am so envious.. In a good way though..
It could be an egg... But I am horrible with riddles.. xD
asinmen #8
Chapter 1: kaisooooooo so cute. i think it's an egg
xina_kathy #9
<3<3 kaisoo

An egg? Lol dont know~~:( x)
shockinggreen #10
Chapter 1: kaisoo is <3 awwww man. where did kai go?!?!? sobs. hahah. beautiful description though. ;)

uhh. is it a coconut?
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