Promise

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In which Yesung spends time with a special hyung and Heechul is offended, while Leeteuk has a hang over and Kyuhyun plays video games.

Foreword

Its 39....I hate odd numbers...sigh....

Its a bandfic. With Leeteuk and Heechul. Deals with Enlistment...isn't very angsty...has some Kyusung...hinted ships.

Finally a short one.

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iam_me00
#1
Chapter 1: Reading this made me feel like I've been with them through those times when the members started to enlist. Thank you for this story
numerousfandoms
#2
Chapter 1: Wow, this was a terrific read. I like how you expressed Leeteuks concerns and the way you characterized Heechul and Yesung. It was really adorable how Kyu found them all asleep together in the same room and how fluffy it all was. :33
JayJayELF
#3
Chapter 1: I am currently having a reading marathon right now and this is the 4th one i have completed and when i'm done with this comment i PROMISE to write a comment on the other 3.
OMG YeTuekChul why are they soo cute, I'm so glad tuekchul are back from the army an now we jus have to wait for Yesung!!!
359359
#4
Chapter 1: I just re read this and adored it. I'm kinda late to the game since Leeteuk has already returned, but I love the way you portray their thoughts and feeling as well as their interactions with one another. I just love how possessive Kyu is but glad he was able to give up that one night with yesung : ) <3 They are all so adorable.
akirachan
#5
Chapter 1: I wasn't able to read for a while and this is the story that welcomes me back.

yup, awesome as usual. Teukie's dilemma about entering the army was almost realistic. :) and as usual, you write godzilla fics (15k+ for a oneshot? really??). I guess that's why i luuuurve reading your stories.

About going on hiatus, if you decide to go on one, I'll be fine with that; but please come back okay? :) thanks for working hard! :) I'll miss your stories. :)
lahdeedah000 #6
Chapter 1: Mehhhhhhhh I don't like the max number of characters/limit thingy. It stops me from rambling and spamming you with useless random talk. T_T

Anywaysss, besides all the amazing sentimental stuff, of course I have to comment on the Kyusung! Dawwwwww Kyu's finally learning how to share! >:D Except, not really, but gahhhh that was so adorable. Heck, they're all way too adorable for their own good.

Ermmmm, I think I'm done now.... hehe ^^" Anyways, KEEP WRITING! (and posting too!) :DD
lahdeedah000 #7
Chapter 1: Gahhhhh I'm so late but better late than never, right? xD

This is, this is just so, so, sooooo WHYYYYYYY NOOOOOOOO ALL YOU NEVER GO OFF TO THE ARMY! NEVER! DON'T! NOOO TEUKIE COMEEEE BACKKKK HEENIMMMM!!!! ;_; I absolutely loathe the fact that they all have to... ~sniffle~

Okay, with that out of the way, I have to say it was really nice do see you write something different from your usual Kyusung. We all already know your ah-mazing writing skills, but you really got their interaction and personalities spot on here. I can totally picture this exact scene happening; Leeteuk's reluctance to share what was wrong, Heenim being demanding yet worried at the same time, and of course, caring Yesung. You portrayed their bond sooooooo incredibly well, I just want to curl up in a corner and cry.

I'm honestly trying to come up with something constructive or helpful to say, but right now I'm just such a sentimental mess, I can't even...T_T

Oh! Something I noticed with all of your stories. In a lot of places that you use "weary", I feel you mean "wary" instead. Definition of weary is "feeling or showing tiredness" while wary means "feeling or showing caution about possible dangers or problems". For example, "he was weary of the army [...] weary that it would be hard on him", and "he would share that sadness, but was weary of pulling down anyone else with him" and "even Eunhyuk was still a little weary of him". In all those cases, I think you mean apprehensive and a bit cautious of, instead of tired of, right? Maybe I'm crazy and completely wrong too... xD

But anyways, YESSSS so glad to know that this is not the end. :) I hope you can tell from all the pre-existing comments that you are very well loved. ;) I do hope they will still be published though. Rather, they better be OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN! Ah yes, I will just keep sending threats your way and bug you endlessly until you get so annoyed that you share your beautiful treasures (and by that I mean your stories) with us.
fishyyy #8
Chapter 1: argh im stupid i forgot something
THANK YOU FOR YOUR HARD WORK!
fishyyy #9
Chapter 1: part 2 dang word limits: finally, you are a complete beast at writing, its been almost weekly updates and on average 20-30k words. the freak?? i wrote an english essay that was 5 pages and 1700 words! wow. and with near perfect english too lol, you're FANTASTIC BABY!!! sorry, im a closet VIP :P i glad you're writing so much because you really seem to enjoy it and if you can crank out well-written mini novels at this rate that make me cry a little inside and laugh the next moment, you're obviously quite good at it!
i understand if you don't want to post anymore stories for a while. as always, more stories would be greatly appreciated although i dont know if my heart could take any more thought of yesungs enlistment, my ultimate bias, i need to go to one of their concerts first and buy him a turtle plushie!!
p.s. yes, i did notice the shoutout and put extra effort in writing this comment <3
p.p.s. also you never wrote that story about a phone call between kyu and yeye when kyu was chilling in greece and made him admit he missed him? i have a good memory... maybe postpone the hiatus one more story.. mwahahahaaa \
p.p.p.s. i leave you with images of our lovely leader http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/271/9/0/leeteuk_by_akekukudah-d2zor2h.jpg http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lryzo2BZhx1qjq8gao1_500.gif our heechul that i miss very much
http://i852.photobucket.com/albums/ab84/makiyoyo/My%20SuJu%20Macros-Captions/roflbot-O6tj.jpg and of course, kyusung! http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_md75hyJ6Ge1rwrfq4o1_500.jpg http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m9npenin8G1qj7ljfo2_500.gif and haha i thought this was great http://ic.pics.livejournal.com/allspecialsmile/32748464/16080/16080_original.gif
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