No One but Her

Description

On a blind date set up by his parents, with another big eyed long hair girl and Hyungsik should be happy. He can't think of anyone but her though.

Foreword

My first oneshot I hope you enjoy. Sorry I am not good at descriptions. I am working on another Hyungsik story that I will post eventually that is totally unrelated to this oneshot and I was going to have this as a preview. I am not sure if will use this for the story yet. Please look forward to it though.

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narutoe #1
Chapter 1: the short & wavy haired girl reminds me of Jihyun. maybe it's just my feels going crazy again from watching The Romantic & Idol. xD

anyways, this was really nice, I liked this alot! (I'm being biased cus I love Jihyun&Hyungsik T__T)

I don't mean to be rude to the comment below me, but I don't think one should criticize if they've never attempted at what they're trying to criticize, yeah? Shortness doesn't determine how well the story is. Diction is word choice, not grammar!

sorry, I couldn't help seeing this story get criticized when it didn't really need to all that much. I LIKE IT! :D
Kimchi_susi #2
Chapter 1: Not bad for a first, author-nim~
Though I never tried writing my own oneshot, I can say you really need to improve.
It was nice but it's just too short. ^_^ Hope to read more.~
I gotta say your diction is really good except for few spellings...
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