Story Title: Best Absolute Perfect Warriors

Author: jamdii

Summary [As given by the author]: BAP Warriors has fallen down from their own game due to too many conflicts within the group. They tried to come back up but conflicts still continue to arise especially with the new recruit, Junhong.

Plot: 9/10

I haven't seen too many dance battle fics, so I found this one to be a refreshing change. However, some parts just seemed downright childish, which I will explain more in the next section.

Character Development: 8/10

I like how you explained about the OC's history with Yongguk and the other B.A.P members, as that helped to explain why they were acting they way they did. Yet at the same time, some parts just seemed too immature. I understand that Junhong is young, however Yongguk also seems to display the same childishness at times. It makes sense that yes, he's afraid of getting betrayed, but he seems to display it in a way that reminds me more of toddlers fighting rather than the anger of a 22-year-old man.

Spelling+Grammar: 7/10

I've noticed that you tend to misuse commas a lot, and insert prepositions when there aren't really any necessary. The story isn't unreadable, but as a native English speaker, it was difficult to read and understand at certain points.

Layout: 7/10

The gif background was kind of distracting while I was reading, because my eyes kept wandering to the glowing outline thing. I was also confused why you kept switching from centered text to left-justified (the latter, however, is the correct to use when writing). Some parts of the story repeated, for reasons I'm not quite sure... you may want to fix that.

Overall Opinion: 7.5/10

First off, I'm sorry for never getting around to betaing this orz

That aside, I thought this fic was alright. The plot was good, the character development was fine, but there was just something about this fic that bothered me. It might be that the writing style was a little too underdeveloped for me to really take seriously, but I'm not entirely sure. This may seem blunt, but I feel like if this plot were written by a different writer, I may have liked it more. Nevertheless, it was a good attempt made. B.A.P fans may want to give this a read, but I'm not personally a fan.

Final Grade: 77%—C+

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