120 Hours

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One hundred and twenty hours.
That is the only time you have.
 
Survive.
That is the only way.
 
Fight.
That is the only option.
 
Will you be the winner that takes it all?
 
If you have what it takes to join the race to destruction…
 
Welcome to The Cabin.

Foreword

“Sounds interesting, doesn’t it?”
 
Lee Jieun merely stared blankly at the silly advertisement on her computer screen. She had probably seen hundreds of other similar advertisements before; these ‘thriller experience’ types of advertisements were actually very banal. Of course, she was far from interested.
 
She shrugged and carelessly replied, “Not really. It sounds like a scam, doesn’t it?”
 
Her friend, after taking a look at the advertisement once more, nudged Jieun in the elbow. “Look at the prizes, though! Fifty million won in cash, an estate as a big as an island, plus a VIP membership card to Shinhwa? You should at least apply for it!”
 
“If you’re so interested, why don’t you go?”
 
“You know I have school this summer! Can’t you go? Please?”
 
Jieun could only sigh as she clicked on the apply button on the screen – it was going to be a long, five day experience.
 

 
I'd like to present my new project, 120 Hours! I'm hoping this will turn out to be a exciting thriller and mystery! Please stay tuned!
 
Started: 10/30/12
Completed: 02/18/13
 
an adaptation of 라시안's '168시간의 공포'
 
 

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yellowcapoo #1
Chapter 12: this is such an amazing story authornim!
Human246 #2
Chapter 12: You write such a great story!! Please write a lot about iu....
uaenaland #3
Chapter 12: Wahh daebak .. this story is just like the korean movie named "A Million " .. it hard to write this kind of story
green_teax #4
FEEEEEEEEEEELS. LIKE WHAT GIRL, YOU WROTE AN AWESOME FIC ON MY FAVORITE GENRE AND I DIDNT FINISH IT SOONER. /BANGS HEAD AGAINST THE WALL

Without feels (lolwhut): I can say that you did a very good job on creating suspense. I was pissed off as people disturbed me while reading this. Haha. The plot twists, missions and character deaths do nothing but kicked up my excitement and I got very addicted. Putting aside the wonderful creativity of the plot, the things this fic lacks are good flow and description in terms of character feelings/reactions and the scenes, but these are entirely my opinions, of course.

I know this type of genre has very calm situation in one sentence and someone gets killed in the another but I feel like you rushed a lot. It did not ruined the atmosphere much but I think it could have been better flow with two or three chapters extended. Maybe this is just your style of writing, but what I'm guessing is that you followed the plan and wrote into twelve chapters although you felt like some parts needed more effort and the path wasn't as perfect as you'd wished.

About describing things, you are just being you, lol. I have said this before: your writing is very to-the-point and especially for these kind of fics, you definitely didn't want to lose the inspiration so you went too fast to enjoy writing plot twists.

I don't have much to say about the storyline and mind-blowing moments--they are very satisfying for me. ;AAAA; we'll, you know me. I don't like the revenge-thirsty characters so I wasn't rooting for Baekhyun (IM GLAD HE DIED. NO CREY CREY FOR U BAEKSHOT). AND Kai wonnnnnnn.

By the way, I kind of skimmed the back story because everything running through my head was wtfwtfwtf yoonyoon can't be that awesome--which MEANS YOU ARe AWESOME OKAY. (dontwasteyourawesomenessplz)

Wow this is very long, but still not meeting word limit HA.
Intoxication
#5
I just finished reading this and wow. It was very creepy, but in a good way. It was really exciting to see things unravel and suddenly be revealed in the last few chapters. Seeds of doubt, suspicion, and anxiety weren't just planted in the characters minds, but also mine as I tried to figure the whole thing out xD

Great story. :)