Chapter 2: I really liked the way that you were able to catch both Henry and Amber's personalities and thoughts through your writing. I could really feel like I was hearing their voices, you know? :3
The only thing I don't really understand was The Liu's sudden decision to ship Amber off to a relative they don't really know, and the idea that Lau is a common last name in Canada despite being distinctly Chinese and the whole "I'm the only Asian!" predicament that Henry is going through. Hopefully it'll be explained as time goes on? :3
Jdsjjsm. So I just found this story. AND HOW ARE PEOPLE NOT OBSESSING OVER THIS. LIKE SERIOUSLY. ;__;
Your description/foreword is amazing. I've only read the very beginning of your story, but I think that I'm already hooked. Henry is so incredibly relatable. I want to reach into my computer screen and give him the biggest hug ever.
Thank you for posting this. I'm going to keep reading now. C:
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