The Bachelorette --- Korean Edition

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15 lucky men will get a chance to win Sandara Park's heart and give her the fairy tale ending she really wanted. These 15 men will compete for her but only one will win her heart. 

Who could it be?

Ladies and gentlemen! Please help me welcome our first ever bachelorette in Korea, Ms. Sandara Park! 

 

(Video of Dara Talking)

I never in a million years thought of being here today.  I am just a simple girl who live in Busan. I am working as a manager in a Trade and Industry company. I was here because of my best friend's Bom. It was all her idea. Well to tell you the truth I  have never been in a real relationship.  I was so busy with my career that I never pay attention in finding the right guy until my 28th birthday. Bom told me she and her long time boyfriend were already engaged.  I couldn't help not to feel jealous. I told her how desperate I was to find my own happiness and she promised me she would help me. I never thought that this was her brilliant plan. 

 

But since I'm already here and not to mention that I'm really desperate to find my own happy ending, I need to make sure that I will pick the right person who will love me forever.

 

Are you ready to meet your 15 prince charming Dara? The limos should be pulling up soon. You can go outside now and have fun!

 

Dara gulped nervously as the first limo pulled out. She took a deep breath, and watched as the first guy stepped out. Her heart skipped a beat when a tall guy in a black suit, smiled at her with his perfect white teeth. All she could think of was how hot he was. 

 

 

"Hi. I'm Top." He said in a deep voice.

"S-andara." she stuttered, "but you can call me Dara. HA! HA!" she laughed awkwardly. Top could see how nervous she was. He couldn't help but to smile at her cuteness. The awkward atmosphere vanished when they started to talk about their families and their jobs. "It is a pleasure to finally meet you Dara." Top said as he kissed her hand. "Me too." Dara squeaked and blushed real hard. He smiled. "I will wait for you inside Dara. Be careful to those losers." he added and winked at her. Dara laughed at his confidence and gave him a quick hugged.

Dara turned back again as she watched the next guy to come out. Her heart beats faster when the guy waved and smiled at her. He wasn't as tall as Top, but he was still taller than her. He had a brown hair spiked up and looked like a badass, but still cute though. she thought.

 

"Hey. What's up?  My name is Jiyong." he said, smiling as he stretched his hand out for a handshake.

 

"Dara. Thanks Jiyong for coming here."  she said, smiling and shook his hand. "I would go anywhere just to see your pretty face." he replied with a huge grin while glaring at her. "Well, thank you. That's really sweet of you." Dara said, smiling and blushing.  "Don't smile like that, my heart is already melting." he shyly said while looking down. "I didn't know you have a cheesy side." Dara laughed. "So you better get to know me more. I can't wait to see you inside." he whispered in her ear and quickly ran inside. Dara laughed at his cuteness despite of his rough badass looks.

 

When the next guy stepped out, Dara's jaw dropped. She stood absolutely dumbstruck as she watched him walked towards her.  She felt her face flushed as he gave her a bright smile. "Am I in heaven now? He looks like...an angel." she thought as she studied his face. He was tall with a slightly long brown hair. Without a doubt, he was the most gorgeous guy she had ever seen.

 

"Hi, I'm Jaejoong but you can call me Jae." he spoke in a soft angel-like voice.

 

"Dara. I'm Sandara Park." she squeaked excitedly. He blushed when Dara smiled at him. "It's a pleasure to meet you Jae." 

"No Dara. The pleasure is all mine." he said with a sweet smile. Her heart started pounding faster within her chest. There was a really awkward atmosphere filling the place as they talked for a couple of minutes. "I'm sorry I think I'm boring you. Will you still talk to me inside?" he shyly asked. "Of course!"she excitedly said, still blushing.

"I guess I have to go now. I'll see you later Dara." he smiled.  Dara smiled back, blushing even more as she stared at him walking into the house.  He seemed... mysterious.  I can't wait to know him more.

Okay I need to get myself back. WAAAAAAAH! This is going to be hard!!! My heart is already thorn between those three. How much more when I see all 15." she thought to herself as she turned back. Her eyes went huge and her heart beats faster again when she saw the fourth guy was already standing in front of her. Everything crowding her mind quickly vanished when he gave her a bright smile. 

 

 

"You were so busy watching him, you didn't even realize I was already here. I'm jealous." he said and pouted.

"No! I'm sorry. I'm just... I'm really nervous." Dara shyly said. He audibly exhaled and smiled as he dipped down while offering his hand.

"It's so nice to finally meet you my princess. Donghae is here at your service."

Dara can't help but laugh at his gestures. He was tall with a slight built and soft brown eyes. He looked like a real prince.  She smiled at him as she reached his hand and he gently kissed it. She blushed. "Thank you my prince. I'm Dara." she chuckled.  They talked for a bit and she immediately felt comfortable with him. "Don't worry we'll talk more inside." Dara said when they noticed the next limo. "Promise?" he asked with a puppy eyes. Dara laughed and nodded. "I can't wait." he winked. Dara giddily smiled as she watched him walked inside.

 

(To be continued.)


 

 

 

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and 8 more to go...

 

 

 

 

 

Foreword

 

 

 

Who do you think will get Bachelorette Sandara Park's Final Rose?

Can she find Mr. Right among the 15 bachelors who are all eager to win her heart? 

Will Dara get her own happy ending?

Find out only here!

SOON!

 

 

 


A/N:

I made this really quick without re- reading or anything. This story is still under construction. Any suggestions for the other 8 guys? What do you think of this story? Who you think should Dara pick? I will probably decide who is Mr. Right by poll voting????  KK! Pyong!

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greiyz_14 #1
Please continue this story authornim
betchay1131 #2
kyahhhhhh......aigoo..pls update..ive waited for months for this story to update...pls authornim..dont abandon this fic..im excited to know who the other guys are..but i want a jaedara fic..actually i love donghae top gd..but jaejong is the best kkkk
msdeathstalker #3
oh my! lucky dara! subscribed... update please
mjjeje_theians
#4
JAEEE uwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa *fan girls* jaejaejaejae ^^
ScarlettxSoul
#5
Seems really interesting :D
21bangyen
#6
jaejoong for me....erm for Dara of course...
rizalalalabyou #7
I want her to end up with TOP ! Oh oh and put song joong ki ! Kyaaaaaa Dara ur so lucky to have all those guys ! Lets see Put Lee Hong Ki , Jung Yong Hwa , Hyun Bin and Dara is gonna die if u put Won Bin . Her ideal man . Hahaha can't wait to freakin read da next chap ! Update soon !
ambiebambiny
#8
song joong ki and park chanyeol
update soon
blackVIP-tryshingggg
#9
Lee Minho and Il Woo. :)
Fanboys overload kyaaaa! Update this authornim! :D