Loneliness

Description

 

They had just graduated from college last week and were ready to spend eternity together. They had already planned to buy the mini flower shop down the street from their house and live their life on the small profits they would earn from selling flowers, contented with just each other. 

Foreword

Hey! This is my first fanfic so I'm excited >.< But I have the tendency to write sad angsty stories:/ Comments are appreciated!

Back to Top ↑

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
woosoogyu #1
Chapter 1: A beautiful tragedy, I must say... T__T
Onepenny #2
Chapter 1: Came here after reading the intro one shot - looks like I won't be disappointed. Thoughy i'd share my appreciation for the story and excitement before I've even started reading properly. Cannot wait to start reading!
BlackjackPride #3
Chapter 1: This is beyond excellent! I love the way you write, keep up with the good work! ♥
Fadedmoonlight #4
Chapter 1: Very admirable indeed. And I must say that for your first fic this was well written! /thumbs up/.
I like this story. A lot actually. Because its not a happy ending - something that every one wants but to be honest not all stories have happy endings. It's easy to say "suicide" is not the answer but it's not easy when you're in that person's shoes. When you've lost your whole life ahead of you, you pretty much feel dead. And that's what she felt. Hence, to her, living on doesn't make sense. There was absolutely nothing to strive for.
Chocathy #5
Chapter 1: This is so sad story. I agree with Yuraaa that the suicide is not an option.
He might be an angle to support her fullfilling their dreams in their own flower shop. Her sadness might attract someone to give her the live back. After that he could rest in peace or became her child.
Is that too much 555
Back to Top ↑