Empty Smiles

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Credit: Wit and Wicked Graphics (THANK YOU J!!)

 

Moon Jongup, he's sweet, kind, compassionate, sunny, and a very weird kid. He's forgetful, spacey, and at times doesn't seem to be all there.

Why? He's just weird (that's what Yongguk figures). He's been that way since day one. Nobody pays it any mind anymore, it's just the way he is.

Though something seems different these days.

It's nothing right? Himchan want's to believe the leader who doesn't seem to notice.

Yongjae senses something................nah he's just overreacting. Dae figures the same.

Nobody ever asks, it's just Jongup being Jongup right?

But Zelo, his curiosity gets the best of him..............

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He follows the dancer when he shouldn't................ends up seeing something Jongup never wanted anyone to know about.

Telling a person's secret is wrong right?

Do you keep your promise even if the person you promised might just be dying inside?

Foreword

It's been soooooo long since I updated but I will make this fic a prioriety now!! I redid a lot in the current chapters so now it's not all icky and gross with the punctuation and grammar and such lol.

CosmoQueen
I'll be updating soon

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crudelycielty
#1
Chapter 4: I love it! The plot is intriguing! I want to read more! Won't you update? Pwetty Pwease~~
Shimmieh
#2
OMG!!! I love it!!!! cmon! i'm waiting for the next update!
ItsJustSarax
#3
Chapter 4: I would ask you to stop giving me so many emotions, but I rather feel them than you not write xD

Okie~ I loved the daejae moment in the car xD lol

Zelo is not too innocent like in other fics but just the right amount of innocent so I'm glad :)
Jongup's character is spot on and I really like the way you portray him, and I can't wait to read what happens next and see if jongup will trust Zelo and see the history with his dad
Himchan is sassy and I love it ;D the way you describe his mother like characteristics is phenomenal
Yongguk is great as well, being..well yongguk ^^

Fighting!!
ItsJustSarax
#4
Chapter 1: I know I should comment after I read all the chapters, BUT YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I LOVE THE SMIDGENS IF BANGHIM LIKE YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW I FEEL READING THOSE PARTS *^*! ....I really hope you you've gotten used to my outbursts already xD....I'll read on now & comment later...
Jongup_Baby_Love #5
Chapter 3: UPDATE!!!! LOVIN IT
Random_kpop #6
Chapter 3: update!! wanna know wat happns
jumpinjac #7
Chapter 1: nooooo tell me what happens!! T^T Fine then, since I can't shake you (you might hurt your hand and that next chapter won't be up) I'll shake myself instead! ...somehow. but please update, please! *huge Jongup fan xD*
aiiamawexxum
#8
Hmm wonder what's with jongup. Really can't wait for more. This story sounds really interesting :D
blackjack_13
#9
OMG I can already tell you fic is going to be great!
Update soon!!!<3