That day, an angel walked into my life and touched my heart.
Foreword
I wrote something! Woah! It's short and bad, I'm sorry I've been so busy with school these days. If I can catch more of a break second quarter I will write some more!
Chapter 1: ASKDJHSKJDHASKJDHA I love the fact that this exchange can happen to any two people, that you did not give names. I wouldn't even expect that this would be Yongguk and Zelo if it weren't for the tags, and maybe, that would be the factor that some would look for in this ficlet. Try to add a bit more descriptions for the characters next time? Let the readers know that it is them without saying their names out loud.:D For me though, this is enough.:) And come on, the writing's not that bad at all! NOT BAD AT ALL!:)
Chapter 1: OMG this is so beautiful! <3
i like a fiction like this, u know, the one that has something to value more than love/. It's a fresher taste and this one has that quality.
human life is kinda depressing, so u got to the point XD lol
and Junhonggie's face in my imagination is soooo cute! a missing tooth? omg come to mama! <3
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