My Little Love

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My Little Love

                     

 

...when the circle of the forbidden love is closed around you and there is no way out.

 

 

Foreword

 

    "My little love, you'll always gonna be my love."

 

It’s hard. It’s really hard when something is forbidden. When you should suppress something so strong so deep inside you. When you have something so special to you in your hands but you know you will never own it in the way that your heart wants.
It’s hard. It’s really hard when two large eyes and a lovely smile take the entire place in your heart and fill it so much that it hurts you all the way. It's hard when the forbidden love embraces you and you know you're doomed  because the forbidden is always real.


                                     
 

Entry for Only Onew writing contest

Promt: Michael Bublé - Haven't Met You Yet

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eexiee #1
Chapter 1: Hi! First of all, thank you for entering the contest!

I feel like this fic felt sort of unfinished...I clicked the "next" button expecting more but I guess this is the end? Another thing is that you didn't pair anyone with Onew, which was the point of the contest, although I guess I could have made that clearer. I think if you used quotation marks instead of dashes, it would be easier to read as well.

I liked the idea of Onew having trouble being a parent! I think it would have been great to see all of that extended, so that we could see how Onew starts to wish he could be around Juliet, or how he tries to get closer to her as a father because he really wants to be a good parent.

I think you're well on your way to becoming a good writer!
oncebefore #2
Aww, so cute ^^
I love the ending, really cute, awww *fainting*
gabimoli #3
It's really strange seeing Onew being loved (or should I say liked) by a kid :D
the story is so cute and sweet! you did a really great job! *o*
KaneMochi #4
Chapter 1: OMG!! Why does that baby's name had to be Julie XD
Everytime onew call that name..I was like *is he calling me o.O*
lol anyway, it is very beautiful X)
thanks for the fic! XD
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