First Love First Loss

Description

This is my first fanfic i hope you enjoy it, your feedback will determine the length of the story as i will be writing it as i go instead at all of once. The chapters are quite short no longer than 800 words so don't be put of by laods of chapters. Most of them take less than 5 minutes to read. Btw this story has a lot of dialogue so if you don't like a lot of dialogue this story might not be for you. Critisism is welcome, it's my first fanfic so i need as much feedback i can get. Enjoy:

Until now, love was at the bottom of Tao's priority's but then he met the girl of his dreams. His life nis about to change, but for the better or worst? Because life isn't a fairy tale and there isn't always a happily ever after...

Foreword

      Chapter Tracker                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                

  • Completed
  • In Progress
  • Planned
  1. Mesmerized 
  2. Upset Panda
  3. Kelly to the rescue (Linked with Loving someone like you by toolongtowrite)
  4. Mariah
  5. It's a date
  6. Impatience
  7. Romantic Panda
  8. Busted
  9. ...
  10. ...
  11. ...
martelldesu
Sorry for the long wait Chapter 7 is completed i will be updating more regularly now!

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Lilkik #1
Chapter 8: I love it,it's perfect.
martelldesu #2
Dear my patient and faithful Subscribers i am very sorry for the lack of posting. I have been VERY busy with school! This weekend i willw rite loads of chapters and there will be a bulk upload. Thank you so much for being patient and not unsubscribing *cough* Mrsfishy XD i'm kidding i don't blame you anyway goodbye for now

From Martell
xx
chenle #3
Chapter 5: Omo. Tao + Mariah = Perfect love!~
Coralie_x_KPOP
#4
Chapter 4: Awww Tao's so cute when he's in love :D