Battlefield

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That tragedy we've been through made me sit here still.
 
 
 
That misfortune made me hold his hand with tears on my face.
 
 
 
That heartache made me feel dead right now.
 
 
 
No. I am dead at the moment.
 
 
 

 

This will be the first time that I'll be writing a oneshot. LOL. :P

So I'll be needing your sincere comments so that I can improve my writing. Thank you so much. :)

 

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suju26kamz #1
Chapter 1: this is saaaad and heart breaking :( but nonetheless very much good!
whutever09 #2
;_____;

That is all. Lol. *claps* Poem-like writing style, you, my dear sir, are unique. You should do more stories (seriously)
heederella #3
wow it's rare to see something written in that style
It was amazing ^__^
Great job :P
dream_keeper88 #4
wow, narrative poetry!<br />
this is good!<br />
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kiseonnie11 #5
OMO!!!~ this is so great! *two thumbs up*
heegee8 #6
it's so good!!!
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