Chapter 1: Hey Sammy! Sorry I only got to write this now. It's been like 5 hours ago since I ate dinner, lol. xD I got too carried away with the heated discussion about that new law.
Anyway, for your first time, this wasn't bad. I thought it was a good start! :) Just keep writing and writing...and have more fun with the words.^^ Honestly, I think that word play is one of the most important keys in writing fics.
I thought the plot was typical but you were able to add your own twists and styles to it which is why it made the story somewhat different, meaning it's a good read. :) That's what I'm always looking for in a story. Though Kyu's my bias, I really had the urge to whack him on the head for hiding those preshas letters. T_T
So, there. Keep writing!^^ Hope to read more stories from you! :)
Chapter 1: Love it! :D
and oh, we're d same! Heechul's my bias followed by Kyuhyun, and KyuChul's my OTP! :)) I'm dying to read more KyuChul fics! Mind recommending kyuchul fics? ^^
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