Sense of Betrayal

Description

Cast

Raymond Lam – he's smart and caring but also stubborn and set in his own ways.

Damien Lam – Raymond's father.  He's a retired construction worker.

Gigi Lam – Raymond's mother.

 

Charmaine Sheh – fun and outgoing but her persona changes dramatically with the deaths of the two people she loves most.

Mary Hon – Charmaine's mother.

 

Other cast as the story develops.

 

Synopsis of the Story:

 

In London Charmaine’s father passes away leaving her and her mother with enormous debts.  With no choice, they sold all their belongings and returned to Hong Kong to seek help and shelter from old friends.

Raymond is happy with the simple life he has created for his family.  All that changes with the arrival of an unwelcome guest who he feels is taking advantage of his parents' generosity.

 

Can two strong people who set their own high standards put away their pride and dignity and open up to love?

 

Foreword

Prologue:

"Everyone, please fasten your seatbelts.  We will be landing in Hong Kong in fifteen minutes."

Charmaine turned from the window to look at her mother.  She was still asleep, her head resting on Charmaine's shoulder.  Touching her mother's face gently, she whispered, "Mom, wake up.  We're landing."

Mary's eyes fluttered slowly open as she straightened up in her seat.  Taking a quick glance out the window she smiled but the smile seemed forced and unnatural on her tired face.  "Everything will be alright for us from now on," she told Charmaine with a positive smile.

Charmaine didn't believe that.  Nothing will ever be alright with her father gone.  His death was too sudden and even now, three months later, Charmaine was still unable to cope with it.  Each night she envisioned her father coming home and telling them it had all been a joke.  He didn't die in that fire and the charcoal body they saw wearing his wedding band wasn't his.  Some thief had stolen his ring earlier that morning and it was the thief's body that burned in the fire.  Not his.  Any day now, he would return and they would have the perfect, loving family they once shared.  It was this hope, regardless of how naïve it was, that pushed her through each day.

"Are you alright?" Mary asked gently, bringing Charmaine back to reality.

Charmaine nodded in response but thoughts of her deceased father remained in her head.

Mary had an inkling to what her daughter was thinking about.  Picking up Charmaine's hand, she assured softly, "I know it's going to be tough for us at the beginning but we'll adjust.  We have to.  Your father would want us to."

Charmaine looked at her mother and on her face reflected Charmaine's own uneasiness for the future.  She wasn't sure if they could do anything without her father.  He had been the rock in their family, the root that held them all together.  Life just won't be the same without him.  Nevertheless, seeing the fatigue and anxiety on her mother's face, Charmaine didn't want to make it any harder on her by constantly reminding them of their loss.  So for the benefit of her mother, she put on a smile and said, "Tell me more about Uncle Lam and Auntie Lam."

The mention of them brought a genuine smile on Mary's face.  "Your father and Uncle Lam met over thirty-five years ago at a construction site.  They became fast friends and had remained friends all these years.  You only met Uncle Lam and Auntie Lam once.  It was on your fifth birthday.  Since then, we immigrated to London and barely kept in touch."

"Do they have children?"

"Yes.  They have a son and a daughter, both around your age.  Their daughter is away on studies now but their son can help with your job search.  Your Auntie Lam tells me that he's a lawyer in some big prestigious law firm that's has worldwide offices."

"Sounds good," Charmaine said feeling for the first time since her father's death that things may actually turn out alright for her and her mom.  "I'm not familiar with Hong Kong and need someone to show me around."  After a pause, she asked, "By the way, what is their son's name?"

"His name is Raymond."

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HottestVIPSone #1
No more update? ):
zoeli98 #2
I really hope you could update this :'(
---typ #3
Chapter 4: I really really hope you update this fic
... T_T
Wasabi
#4
Chapter 4: I was afraid you weren't going to update again. :o
bietvui #5
I'm also a silent reader.
Thank you very much , I love your writing !
midnightdreamz423 #6
Chapter 4: Hey Simcon! I have always been your silent reader. I just want to say that I am very happy to see you update again! It worries me when I did not see you update these last few months...please don't give up on writing fantastic stories for our lovable couple, CharRay!!! Hope to see you update soon!
cassidy
#7
I do know u don't get a lot of subscribers but dat doesn't mean u aren't a good writer. Ure one of the best I've come across in this site. Read all ur stories and now am confused among the plots of the story as well but I love them all. I'm sure that readers here will soon learn of u n love ur stories d way I do. Ur stories at least have substance in comparison 2 many others!
Keep doin the great work and please update soon!
I got my semester exams starting soon but I will drop by to see if I can get an update!
Keep safe!
simcon888 #8
Dear Cassidy, I get all my ideas from daydreaming. LOL. Silly of me I know! If I don't post a chapter for a while it means I'm still in the drafting phase. And the comments from my readers motivates me to write more.
cassidy
#9
Chapter 3: Thank you Simcon. I love ur stories and have read each one of them. And my only question is how do you write them all?
I am amazed by you!
Keep it up!
simcon888 #10
Dear Cassidy, thank you for reading and supporting my stories. I don't normally reply to readers and didn't think my readers wanted any feedback from me other than my continually updating my stories. I apologize for my neglect in responding to readers. All my readers' support and comments are greatly appreciated. It helps me in determining how each of my stories should continue. So please comment as frequent as possible. Thanks.