What Naturally Follows

Description

It's not surprising that Yukwon's been a tiny bit in love with Jiho since day one.

Foreword

this is my block b otp. i've had this idea floating around for two weeks now, and i finally took an hour to write it out.

 

It's not surprising that Yukwon's been a tiny bit in love with Jiho since day one. What he doesn't know is that Jiho may have been a tiny bit in love with him as well.

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Zofcuu
#1
Chapter 1: This was so cute <3 I'm soft
xxxrainclawxxx #2
Chapter 1: AWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Angzhu
#3
Chapter 1: That was the sweetest thing ever... Gah <3
Bluebell88
#4
Chapter 1: These two are gorgeous together.I really love them.
This world needs more ZiKwon
parachutes #5
Chapter 1: Y'know.... I've probably read this fic over a dozen times now whenever my craving for zikwon hits. I've never left a comment before because I , but I finally decided to just because i can never get over how perfect this story is. I know it's been forever ago since you've posted this but I just had to tell you that I love this to pieces. Great work!
ZombieL #6
Chapter 1: Aww! This was sooooo sweet! I loved it! :)
freemyse0ul
#7
Chapter 1: this is really good and very well written :) i like how you portrayed them! i loved how you described their first kiss! like.. how they were talking about it, before they were actually doing something. i never read something like that before, so this was great! and the ending was so cute, that jiho actually admitted that he liked him and that he even said it out loud :) thanks for writing it!
samgyeopsal
#8
Chapter 1: (cont. from previous comment!)

I imagined Jihoon in this as the kind of longsuffering maknae who loves all of his hyungs and looks on at the ongoing entertainment, from the way he laughed at Zikwon winding up in the same bed to stealing Jaehyo's pork and feeding Minhyuk some as well (this image of Pyobomb was SO cute!). And your TAEIL. God. You gave him the BEST line and I really just sat here, threw my head back and laughed :)

OK and now on to Zikwon! I can honestly say that I really enjoyed this fic so much, despite Zikwon not being my OTP or anything! Truthfully, I ship most pairings in this group of seven silly boys, but I think the way that you've portrayed them is one of the best that I've read so far. I love how comfortable they are with each other, and the way they simply settled into their relationship, minus any angst or unnecessary drama because it's almost as if they were already on their way to becoming more than just best friends. The beginning of the fic, with Jiho being pathetically sick and Yukwon still falling to his whiny charms and petting him, was just sweet. And when Jiho crawls into Yukwon's bed, with Yukwon still worried about his sickness until Jiho and insults his pillow! Basically all the lovely bed scenes with them getting more and more comfortable with each other made me smile :') I especially liked the thought of Jiho making a y mix tape for them.

So um! Thank you for this! I'm so happy that I got to read this wonderful piece of writing, and I hope to see more from you in the future! :D
samgyeopsal
#9
Chapter 1: Hello, Author! :) Let me just tell you that this fic more or less made my DAY because of how wonderful and amazing it is, and I had to create this account because I desperately wanted to leave you a comment about how great it is! Secondly, I'm sorry for the wordvomit you're about to read ;;;; I've reread your fic a few times now, and I've got to tell you that each time I read it, I'm even more entertained that the previous time, and I really just love how you write!

I adore the mood you created in this fic, the kind of comfortable setting you managed to wrap around the seven of the boys in their dorm. I like how you've portrayed all of them the way they are--as boys, because they are, and I loved all the little details and allusions to their characters that stem from tweets and little things that the boys themselves have shared with us (I especially love that you mentioned all of Jaehyo's energizer drinks!).

The way you've characterized all of them is amazing and spot on, and I had such a good laugh at the way you portrayed Kyung, because everything from how he wakes everyone up to stare at Zikwon to him ____ing at Jiho and his silly, leaderlike dictatorship is just so /Kyung/ to me :3 I LOVED the Jaecokyung tussling and girly wrestling, definitely one of my favourite parts because I could really imagine them rolling about and bickering and shoving each other around. Minhyuk and Kwon ____ing at each other about Zikwon spooning was cute and hilarious (I snorted irl at " cherry" lmao omg) and the Minhyuk and Kyung interaction was SO amusing to me. I /loved/ how Jaehyo was so whiny and snippy in this, from his attempt at policing no ___ in the van (Kyung getting ignored was SO FUNNY to me as well btw) and threatening to end Jihoon for stealing his pork.