No Escape

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The ten of them were just trying to live happy, peaceful lives. However, after meeting Kyuhyun they’ve had nothing but troubles. They’ve all been tricked into a test trial for an unreleased game, discovering they’ve been trapped in a virtual world. Now the ten of them have to find a way out while somehow surviving as well.    

Foreword

"Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday, dear Cho hee! Happy birthday to you!" 

Cheers and claps filled the room as I blew out the candles on my cake. We quickly moved onto opening presents. I finally finished unwrapping all the presents, or so I thought. In the corner laid a small rectangular box. I reached for it, happily unwrapping the gift. Inside was a small box with a picture featuring multiple people. 

"Astonishia Story"  I read aloud.

The day of my seventh birthday party was also the day I had recieved my first video game. That was how it all started, my love of gaming. Even now ten years later I can still vividly remember that day. 

What would have happened if I had never received that game? Well, for one I probably wouldn't be stuck in this virtual world. I probably never would have met Kyuhyun. I probably would never have gotten to have an actual conversation with Myungsoo. I never would have met Jin Ae, Jae Hwa, and the rest of them, either. I suppose alot of good things came out from my obsession, except for meeting Kyuhyun. Meeting him was probably the worst mistake of my life. If not for him I'd be safe and sound, living my ordinary life. Now we're stuck in this world with no escape.    

 

 


An entry for ErisChaotica's, Infinitized Writing Contest. Hope you enjoy :)

 

 

 

 

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honeylove
#1
Chapter 3: Haha I can so imagine Kyuhyun's smirk and his evil laugh- oh wait, he didn't laugh...
Yay, an update~ It's been a long time, right, author-nim? I knowhow it feels to be distracted almost all the time, so take your time in updating ^^
Oh and... something felt weird. Where was her parents? Work? Shouldn't Hyesu call them first or something? Idk... ><
honeylove
#2
Chapter 1: You're rewriting? Aww. All your past efforts went to waste. But I'm not going to comment though. It's your decision as the author and I will respect it :)

So you're still keeping Kyuhyun as the antagonist! Yay! xD
But... Woohyun? The boyfriend? The best friend? Or the sister's boyfriend? Or the sister's boyfriend's little brother? Or... a neighbour who excessively cares about his neighbour? O.O
Ok lol, that was stupid :P
honeylove
#3
Chapter 3: Wow, this is really nice!
I can't believe I was momentarily deceived of Kyuhyun's intention. Hmm, why did he do that? I'm so curious~
...I wonder what happens to her body in the real world. LOL.
honeylove
#4
Chapter 1: I sense a sinister move behind Kyuhyun's seemingly innocent introduction to her.
hmm, this is really interesting! It's rare seeing an OC which is a gamer, hardcore or not.
Good luck in the contest!! ^^v