Piano Keys

Description

A soul leaves us, returns to God. The sound of piano keys and melodies leading the way. Leaving the world behind...his love behind.

 

A/N: I happened to be listening to the song "Kiss the Rain" by Yiruma and wrote this spontaniously. I've lost many people over the last four years in high school and I always ended up listening to that song when I was upset. Sometimes it made my sadness worse, sometimes better. This song as made me cry alot. I usually am when listening to it. So if you want to take a peek into how I felt when I listen to that song, feel free to click on the link below and listen to it as you read.. It brings out alot of the emotion I tried to portray. I hope you enjoy <3

Kiss the Rain - Yiruma.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WIbUNfg_wmM

Foreword

‘He didn’t want to go.

He doesn’t like to see you sad.

But he must go.

He had no choice.’

Yet, the boy does not stop his tears, more and more travel down his face as the younger child speaks to him.

‘He’s going to a better place… You’ll see him again.’

Again…

                More piano keys… playing slowly, crisp, and soft.

A familiar melody, a comforting tune…

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Goddess-of-Love
#1
Chapter 1: Okay so I've made a decision and it is that you write the best short stories. Like ... I've never read short stories that have left me this conflicted and emotional before. Author's have a bad habit of describing to much and maybe losing some of the raw emotion. You don't do that.

The best part of this story was it's lack of clarity; instead of throwing it in our face that Taemin is a ghost/spirit, instead you allow us to realize it ourself slowly. It made it alot more powerful ... the mystery made the discoveries so important and beautiful. When Taemin kisses the tear off Minho's cheek but Minho can't feel it ... it's hard to even describe the feelings there are so many. The reader wants to be happy that Taemin can somewhat feel again, and yet there Minho is and he gets to experience none of this and just sadness and then at the end were maybe Minho can hear Taemin and for a minute you get hope that maybe this is all a dream but the reader and Minho realize that wow, Taemin is actually gone and just ... explosion of emotions.

Knowing Minho somewhat knows what Taemin says is the only relief we as the audience get and yet it fit so perfect.
SHINee_fangirl_4ever
#2
Chapter 1: wow!!! this is so good!!! =)
chasing #3
Chapter 1: This story was so beautiful! It was one of the best bittersweet fics I've ever read.
carrotcake #4
you made me shed tears. it was short yet undeniably full of emotions. :'(
FroggyMin
#5
<3 beautiful :')
Lucifer_Girl12
#6
I think i do this for everyone of your stories, but... YOU MAKE ME CRY! (CRY)! PLZ TELL MY WHY? (WHY?) OH BABY YOU MAKE ME CRY YEAH OH BABY YOU MAKE ME CRY. OH BABY JUST TELL ME WHY YEAH. but on more serious note you really did make me cry... in the basement... at my dorm... while doing my laundry.... I.HATE.YOU. (not really!"
MyMinnieHo
#7
This is so beautiful...