A start of a long night

Our Entangled Fate

 

“What was that?” Baekhyun asked as he slumped himself on her couch.

“What?” Jinri snarled back at him—eyes glaring dangerously—and Baekhyun knew better not to prod her any more.

“Nothing,” Baekhyun mumbled as he got his sweater out of his head, leaving him only in his black shirt with silver skull embroidery in the front, revealing his well defined arms. He threw the expensive sweater on the coat hanger and pumped his fist on the air when it successfully landed on the hanger.

“Where are the others?” Jinri questioned; eyes watching Baekhyun intently while the guy simply hummed lowly while ping his bag open.

“Soojung is still sick, Sunyoung is out on a sudden Friday date, and Sehun… Well, you know how Sehun is. If Soojung isn’t around, he would rather study on his own than with us,” he answered nonchalantly, as if he didn’t know what is wrong with him being the only one who showed up in her flat on the supposedly group study.

“I guess that leave me only with you then. If you have said so, we’d rather study together in the library or our usual café. Jongin-oppa will kill me if he knew this. Kyungsoo-oppa had told him not to let me be alone with a guy in the flat,” Jinri said matter-of-factly as she walked to the kitchen.

“Corrections: he will kill me if he knew. Kyungsoo will kill him if he dares to lay a finger on you,” Baekhyun hollered—so that she could hear him—with eyes deflecting the lights from his newly- laptop. Jinri rolled her eyes hearing his remarks, but then, she remembered that he couldn’t see him since she was in the kitchen. Sigh escaped her lips while she poured the boiling water into the tea pot. After grabbing a bag of chips, she came back into the living room with the tea.

“I’ve texted you about this, just for your information,” Baekhyun told her while snatching the chips from the table before Jinri even offered him to. “I know how dear your Jongin-oppa can be, after all,” he added as he mercilessly ripped the chips bag open. “However, I refuse to study outside now because as you can see, I’m not having my coat,” he reasoned; mouth munching on the chips noisily.

Jinri remembered Baekhyun’s coat on Joohyun and she frowned. “It’s not my fault that you’re no longer wearing a coat,” she muttered with suppressed annoyance. Baekhyun tapped his chin thoughtfully; Jinri’s sudden sour expression interested him. He decided to try his luck again.

“That lady outside--Joohyun-ssi, isn’t it?—do you know who she is waiting for? It’s not you, right?”

Jinri’s frown hardened; she wasn’t in the mood to discuss it.

“You can clearly see that she isn’t standing in front of my door.”

Jinri’s answer was curt and hinted with blatant finality, but it sparked more interest in Baekhyun.

“But, you know her, right? She seems to be waiting in front of Jongin-ssi’s place, is she waiting for him?”

Jinri’s grip on the teapot tightened as she poured the tea into two cups. She fought the urge to splash the hot, freshly-boiled tea onto his mischievous smirk.

“Yes, and that is none of your business,” she seethed impatiently; eyes glaring murderously at Baekhyun, who paid no heed at all to the morbid threat.

“But the fact that she is out there, freezing while waiting for someone who isn’t going home before midnight, is it none of our business too?”

His words were nonchalant and innocent, but it had successfully punched her in the gut. However, Jinri knew that Joohyun had done much worse to Jongin, almost causing him to lose his will to live, so she ignored Baekhyun.

“Jinnie, you do realize that we are going to be doctors, right? Aren’t we supposed to care about others’ well beings before our own grudges? Aren’t we supposed to always give the best treatment, even to our enemies?” 

Jinri stared back at Baekhyun, who looked at her with glints of triumphant on his chocolate orbs. She could almost palpate the smirk that was about to be formed on his pouty lips. “She is not my enemy,” she muttered without tearing her intense gaze on him, “and why don’t you bring her to your mansion if you care so much about her?”

The awaited smirk broke on his lips. “We both know that is not what she wants. Or are you afraid to be under the same roof with your rival?”

The staring contest between Jinri and Baekhyun intensified, but then she broke away in defeat. “Seriously, Baek, quit with your little silly idea about me and Jongin-oppa. There is nothing…” Baekhyun raised his eyebrows in disbelief but she pretended to be oblivious about it, “more than a good friendship between us. And the woman outside…” Jinri paused and diverted her eyes to the door, “is the one who broke Jongin-oppa and almost killed his soul. As a good friend, isn’t natural to feel the same rage toward such person.”

When he heard her reasoning, Baekhyun’s lips automatically curved downward in doubts; his lips jotted out cutely. Noticing the changes in his expression, Jinri snarled at the slanted-eyes boy. “What do you want, Baek? I don’t think you really care about Joohyun-ssi; you are just trying to get under my skin, right?”

Baekhyun rolled his eyes at her accusation. “How come do you think of me so lowly like that?” he said in faked hurt. However, Jinri’s displeased frown stopped him from mocking her further. “Jeez, you’re no fun, Jinnie,” he whined while pouting like a kicked puppy. She wasn’t amused with his childish act, but she was still considering what he had told her. It was indeed rather heartless of her to let Joohyun froze outside, despite of everything that Joohyun had done. It could have been considered to be her fault if Joohyun ended up being hypothermic because of the weather. Joohyun might be the bad guy in Jongin’s life, but it didn’t mean that Jinri should do the same to her, because Jinri is much, much better than her. Jinri blew her bang. Although she didn’t want to admit it, Baekhyun was suggesting the right thing to do.

“Alright, then,” Jinri mumbled while getting up from her seat. “I’m not doing this because of you, okay? My conscience tells me to do so,” she murmured and tried her best to ignore Baekhyun victorious smile. “Whatever you say, Jinnie,” he said in a ‘Yeah, right’ kind of tone. “You’re such a good girl,” he cooed, and laughed when Jinri flipped the finger at him before opening the door.

“Joohyun-ssi, do you want to wait inside?”


TBC


 


an:

umm. hello. So, here is a super short update for the story. I'm sorry that it took me forever to update. It's just... well, I haven't been to write well for this story and haven't been satisfied with what I've written. I haven't abandoned this story and will still writing it, so thank you so much to the many subbies, commenters (is that even a word?), and voters who have given their support to me. 

comment replies:

 

@ sitomat: thank you for the compliment. ^^ I can't wait to see how it unfolds as well ^^
 
@a-wallflower: I've just updated ^^ Really short, but still updated^^ Thank you for your excitement. Yes, Kris will be coming back, just wait a bit more.. ^^
 
@Yasamin96: thank you for your love for the story.^^ I'm trying my best.
 
@wu-xi-zhang: noooo... I'm not abandoning this one, rest asured.^^
 
@PerfectionistOmma: so am I. I'm a little bit stuck in writing it, though.
 
wrotedearly: Yeah. Joohyun should make up her mind, don't you think?
 
-justadreamer-: yeah, what a coincidence. I love Baekkie. Somehow, I've always liked the way I write his character, even if he is not in the main chara. ^^
 
icekyuream: wow. I'm glad that you can guess who it is. My mission is accomplished! ^^
 
Blueberrykiss:ah ah ah. Brace your heart, Dear, because you are reading something that is written by someone who loves to break hearts, kekeke...
 
Layseokris: hi dear^^ Seohyun is... in a pretty complicated situation, I agree. Now it's kind of clear why I chose the title, ne?
 
r_hbkl:ahahaha. Joohyun still remembers him, somehow. Baek is is my second favorite member in EXO, I can't help but write him in such light, even though he is just a minor character in this story. I love him. >_<
 
 
eycha_sk11: Joohyun will meet him. somehow.
 
Jannet: wait for it ^^ and for the main couples... look forward to it^^
 
sone_for3v3r: probably he will. And I've just updated ^^
 
ambai90: waa... another shipper! ^^
 
nanjang: ehehehe... Krissy will be returning to the story soon ^^
 
dcseokyu: of course not, unnie ^^ He'll be returning soon.
 
sambeigle: we'll see, okay? ;)
 
shinyshinee4, paboshio: we'll see~~
 
arcadian-warrior: keep on wishing, it may come true. ;)
 
popgirl345534: ay girl! we'll see. I'm pretty sure that this one will end with a pretty happy ending. Well, at least to my standard. ^^
 
I'm sorry if I haven't replied all the comments. I've read all, though, and every single ones are really meaningful to me. I hope I can update soon, and by 'soon' it is and actual 'soon', not EXO's or SM's definition of 'soon.' kekekeke.... anyway, anyone excited for EXO's comeback? ;)
 
with love,
himalayancat
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[Our Entangled Fate] Ch 7 is out. Sorry for the supper long wait.

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jinjin_sulli #1
Chapter 7: Hi a new reader here well this is a really good fanfic i like kyungsoo's and jinri relationship also jinri and jongin but there's seohyun so if jinri didnt end up with kai ummm baek looks good lol even kyungsoo thought the mention of his name brings her a smile soooo yup and for seo idk looks like kris loves her or smth like he kept his cold image or whatsoever but when he was about to loose her he just said everything in his heart so yaaay for seokris thougt i ship kailli so hard (lol at me smh) but if seo will make him happy again that's if he gave her a chance i'll be good but still i'm with kailli allthought there's not much in this fic that makes me want them together anyway greast story and plz update soon
themartyr #2
When will u update this story?
Hannie_2511 #3
Chapter 7: I cant waitttt....to know that Kris still has his hope in their marriage!! I want seohyun and Kris together...hehe
Serenecurry13 #4
Chapter 7: Ohmygosh I first started reading "Our Intertwined Red thread" and just when I thought seohyun was gonna spend the rest of her live with jongin BAM a cliffhanger.. And so I just read every one of your sequels until now. And srsly after reading every single chapter you leave me wanting more :( as much as I want seokai, I really want seokris too but then baekhyun comes out of nowhere and Ugh I don't know but I'm really excited for the next chapter tho! Author-nim hwaitingggg ^^
seokhun47 #5
Chapter 7: i really want seokai here pleaseeee..!! :)
fanfic_lover
#6
Chapter 7: Just read the sequel again. TWICE.
I miss this story soooo much! I've been waiting for months~
My pent up feels *SOBS*

SeoKai or Krishyun?! O.o
SeoKai would be like a happy first-love ending
but Krishyun's married and Kris is giving out angsty loving feels >o<
I DON'T EVEN KNOW ANYMORE!!!
Poor Kai, poor Kris, poor Seohyun~ (though they're probably not 'poor' in the literal sense keke)
and angst isn't even in the tags (thank heavens or I'd probably die) *x*

Waiting and simultaneously preparing to combust~

KYAAA~!
massivetts #7
It has been a long time since you updating, fyi i really love this story, hoping Our Entangled Fate will makes it's comeback :)
a-wallflower #8
i miss this story :(
theresia #9
Chapter 7: uhm..
this has not ended..right??

i hope Seo will stick till the end with her husband..Kris
i want Seo loves him back..or gives him second chance..