Almost Love

Description

She should be happy, Soojin supposed—no more walls kept her from the outside world, kept her from seeking what she’d lost, what she’d long since yearned for.
 
“You’re awake.”
 
Almost.
 

Foreword

Written as my entry for watermelon's Beyond Infinity Writing Contest. [Edit – tied for fourth and special mention]
 
Contest prompt: 6. “I said to go, I said I’m okay.” - Can U Smile
 
Alternate universe - OC and setting inspired by Greek mythology in general. I didn't have a specific myth in mind.

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kintoun
#1
Chapter 1: oh nooooeeeessss
i demand you make a sequel! /slapped; kickedaway
it left me hanging but god yeah it was beautifully written still! c:
it was as if you lived in the tribe or sth, based on how well you know how they lived xD
i think i have officially red all your stories and i should say that youbneed more recognition ; u ;
you are such a wonderful writer! /sobs
thanks for writing this! will wait for more beautiful stories to come ;)
Gazeru
#2
Chapter 1: Nice ending ^.^
I thought Howon would tell her the truth but you made it the other way. Well-plotted indeed :D
kekeke. I think I've read most of your fics except for the multichap :P
SerenaSangtae
#3
Chapter 1: this story is so beautiful i need to know what happened to both of them!
ErisChaotica
#4
I really like what you did with this story. The setting was well-developed, as was the relationship between Soojin and Hoya. I like that you wrote an open ending, and I appreciate Hoya's maturity and selflessness in letting Soojin go. It's a nice contrast to the possessive and sappy "omg I can't live without you" relationships you find on AFF a lot.

Even though you're my rival, good luck with the contest. I think your story will probably win over mine. ^^
watermelon
#5
Hello!
Just to inform you that I have placed your entry under the 'Completed' section already.
Have a great day ahead!
watermelon
#6
Thank you for joining the contest!
I have just added your entry to the list of 'Received Entries'.
Have a great day ahead!