Chapter 1: Wow I didn't expect this kind of story at all. It's confusing at some points since there's a lot of switching between Alice and Joohee, but it's not a major problem. I think it's interesting that you put this way - in one life he's living as he is now, but in an alternate universe he's living normally as someone you'd probably pass by in the streets. But as you mentioned it, either ways, both Joohee and Alice love him all the same :)
Chapter 1: This fic is good!
It was really confusing on why Minhyuk dreamt of Alice as Joohee, but you answered it when you said Minhyul would only cross the line to call Alice as Joohee when he will introduce her as his girlfriend he would want to marry. \omgFeels
Also, the fact that I don't know what happened in his dreams whe Joohee left him. Asddfajhf. But Atleast Alice forgives him..and love him too.
I expect more Minhyuk-Alice fics from you! Fighting!
and one more thing! This didn't disappoint!
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