dearkai: Winter Fling

Title: 3/10
Couple: 6/10
Prompt: 5/5 (True Love Doesn't Have A Happy Ending, Because True Love Doesn't Have An Ending)
Plot: 40/50
Following of rules: 22/25
Overall: 76/100

Extras:

*You entered your entry super early, so an extra 2 points.

Comments:

DearKai, 
I thought your title was cute, but it didn't seem super original to me... 

Jinki! I love Onew. xD But I'm not so sure about the Eunjung girl. You didn't give a very detailed visual of her. At first I thought it was Eunjung from T-ara, and was dissppointed as she is not from SM, but I read the tags and realized she's an O/C. ^^  

Well, obviously the prompt was from me and all, so I can't give low marks on that. xP  Your story fit the prompt very well!! 

The plot... Well I know it's sort of cliche and all, but to be honest I rarely read these type of stories. I liked it. Sometimes it was a little to cotton-candy for me. xD But overall a nice story. ^^  

Uhm... Rule #8 was for no , and there was boyxboy side romance for Jongkey. x( I love Jonghyun, and Key, but not together. xP Sorry about that. 

So your overall was 78!! Congrats!! ^^

-SeoBaByy: Fear

Title: 7/10
Couple: 8/10
Prompt: 5/5 (Maybe I'm Scared To Say I'm Falling For You.)
Plot: 45/50
Following of rules: 25/25
Overall: 90/100

Extras:

Comments:

-SeoBaByy, 

Your title was nice, and out of the box, but didn't exactly go with the story very well. From the title I expected some suspense. 

I liked the couple. Not only because I'm a Jongstal shipper, but that couple was out of the box, and very rare. :)

I loved it. You fit the quote perfectly. But your story was still very cliche, and cute. I liked the ending ;)

You followed all the rules, thank you.

Overall score was 90! Good job and congrats!

Karasette_: Footprints in the Snow

Title: 8/10

Couple: 7/10
Prompt: 5/5 (It All Comes Down To The Last Person You Think Of At Night, That's Where Your Heart Really Is.)
Plot: 46/50
Following of rules: 25/25
Overall: 91/100

Extras:

Comments:

Karasette,

Your title was original, and very intriguing.

I liked the coupling, and you really made me believe it was really Key. ^^

Your prompt really fit the story, I liked that.

The plot was nice, and the ending was sad. It was very realistic, and I like that it wasn't bright and sunshine, because it wouldn't have fit the idea of her death. :) 

You followed all the rules! xD

Your overall is 91!! Good job. ^^

iheartsoojung: So Much For Being Just Friends

Title: 4/10
Couple: 8/10
Prompt: 5/5 (It All Comes Down To The Last Person You Think Of At Night, That's Where Your Heart Really Is.)
Plot: 46/50
Following of rules: 25/25
Overall: 88/100

Extras:

Cute poster. ^^ 1 extra point
 

Comments:

iheartsoojung,

Your title was very predictable and wasn't very orignial, sorry. So we had a misunderstanding on this title thing, sorry about that. But the title still seems pretty cliche, and would have been better if you wrote it differently, i.e. So much for being "Just Friends" or added ... to the end would've been better too.

I love the coupling, because I'm a ShineyEffects fan. And I loved that you added Jonghyun (but I'm being biased there xD).

The prompt fit very well.

I loved the plot! It was very cliche, but I felt your story flow, and it wasn't rushed. ^^

You followed all the rules, thank you.

Your overall was 89! Thanks and congrats!!

SimplyAsian: Bounded By Love

Title: 9/10
Couple: 8/10
Prompt: 5/5 (True Love Doesn't Have A Happy Ending Because True Love Doesn't Have An Ending.)
Plot: 48/50
Following of rules: 25/25
Overall: 95/100

Extras:

Comments:

SimplyAsian,

I thought your title was very original and fit the story quite well! ^^

Well, I love super generation, and love Seokyu, so reading your story was a + for me xD

Your story fit the prompt very well!! 

Wow. Where do I start? Your plot was nice, the characters fit their personalities well. The ending was sad, but realistic. The dream was really sweet, and overall the story was bea