Temptation

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hey there! -waves- I'm back with something new ^^

This story is really random and I thought of it while looking at one of my icons:

this one --->

At first I thought of using an original character for it [like the rest of my stories] but then I thought I would use F(x)'s Luna for it ^^ 'coz she's cute and all. And my characters and pairings are quite random too... ^^" Forgive me for it?

I don't know if I will be able to upload frequently, but I will try =)

Foreword

Name: Temptation
Rating: G/PG is there difference in them
Characters:      Park Sunyoung aka. Luna --- f(x)
                         Kim Jonghyun --- SHINee
                         Choi Seunghyun aka. TOP --- Big Bang
                         Shin Se Kyung
Summary:
 

The first time I saw her was on a picture.
And I couldn’t take my eyes off of her.
It’s not like I’ll get to know her.
And I have someone who I love and who loves me back.
…But then again… I guess I want her.
She’s my only temptation.

The first time I saw him was on a picture.
And I couldn’t take my eyes off of him.
It’s not like I’ll get to know him.
And I have someone who I love and who loves me back.
…But then again… I guess I want him.
He’s my only temptation.
 

 

And a little something to the summary: everything is as it is; only Luna is not part of f(x) but it’s a model and Jonghyun dating Se Kyung is not publicly known. One more thing, so I won’t have to write every time the same things - Luna’s POV and Jonghyun’s POV

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gotler #1
Don't ship it, but nice!
DancingQueenHyoyeon #2
nice story
ParkMiyoung #3
This story in a nutshell: AMAZING!<br />
Good points:<br />
- good plot<br />
- love both characters (maybe not together, but I didn't mind here at all)<br />
- really romantic<br />
- not too predictable<br />
- beautiful ending!<br />
<br />
Bad points:<br />
....I don't have those XD<br />
<br />
The story reminded me of the song "Why can't I" by Liz Phair :)
xChichii #4
That was ... Nice! Liked it ;d
nisyaz #5
Awww I didn't expect that. <br />
Kinda disappointing me lol <br />
There wasn't that much good fics on Jongna that I could find and this one was really tempting and it made me scream when you updated. <br />
Kinda sad but I'm glad to see what I got :3<br />
Thanks for having this story! (LOL) <br />
If you ever do one on Jongna or any Shiny Effects couple that I ship, please do tell me~
nisyaz #6
OMG OMG <br />
Nooo it's not too predictable nor plain, it's AWESOMEE! <br />
YES! Now I'd like Jjong to dump Sekyung XD <br />
Can't wait for the next update :D
Kekeke123 #7
jongna <3 spending valentine's day together?
MoPetal #8
Update ^^
MoPetal #9
Ohhhh I want to know what happens neeext . UPDATEEEE :D
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