Chapter 15: Update pls

Chapter 15: Omg!! Update this fic please!!

Chapter 15: ooooooooooooooooooohh

Chapter 15: Myungsoo did tell Taeyeon that he'll wait for her, so it's very unlikely that he'll rush things. He is being patient with her knowing that she'd return his love someday. After the accident, Taeyeon feels awkward facing him because of the memory that surfaced in her mind when he's near her. The kitchen in her apartment room must be small for them to not have much space to move around. What we're left wondering is how Myungsoo feels about that. He might be just as awkward as Taeyeon, but it could be hard to tell when he look so calm and collected.

"All My Love Is For You" is a beautifully sung ballad. They have good harmony throughout the song.

The "Flower Power" music video looks cool. It's interesting to see them try a new style. This is new seeing Sunny and Jessica doing the rapping.

Chapter 14: It seems that Taeyeon and her groupmates will be rising to stardom, and things would get busy for all of them. Myungsoo calling Taeyeon his "star" does refer back to the necklace that he'd given her as a gift. The romantic vibe that the scenery is giving off must have that effect on her mood. That also got Myungsoo in the mood to confess to her. His love for her must be genuine for him to be emotional about it when she didn't accept it right away. Since he still has a chance with her, it's a sign that she's not rejecting him. This means that it's not a one-sided love. Hearing those words from her gives him assurance that he shouldn't give up on her. He is understanding to give her time to adjust since she's not ready yet for love. Because of love, it's worth waiting for her. With his endless support, she'd get through it all right. The time would come when she'd be willing to return his feelings.

Chapter 13: Myungsoo is thoughtful to buy such a nice gift for her knowing that she'd like it. The design of the necklace fits with the concept of the song. A star does come to mind when the word "twinkle" is mentioned. Her performance seems to have amazed L.Joe. It's something he didn't expect coming from her. He probably thought that she's just an ordinary girl whom he'd bumped into outside with no talent. He must be around to visit his cousin since he gets time away from his career activities. Taeyeon just didn't want to face L.Joe, so that's why she decided to leave early rather than stay and hang with them.

There are slight changes to Taeyeon's appearance because of puberty. She's grown into a fine woman.

Chapter 12: Taeyeon is like a kid in the way that she's bonding with ice cream. She is carefree to have moments where she's in her own little world wihtout minding the presence of others. Judging from the reaction of the girls in the ice cream parlor, the group of guys that came walking in must be idols--including the one that Taeyeon bumped into earlier. Taeyeon must've not really delve into the pop world to know about him and the group he's in. L.Joe must think that all girls who bump into him are fans of his because of the attention that he gets from the majority of girls that he's come across. Because of him, her spirits are dampened and she's not in the mood for ice cream. If he'd spoken to her without sounding arrogant, then she wouldn't have gotten irritated.

Chapter 11: Myungsoo doesn't seem to be the only one disappointed about their outing being cancelled. Taeyeon also feels the same inside. She really was looking forward to spending some time alone with him. It couldn't be helped that Tiffany and Seohyun happened to drop by and decided on having a girls' day out with her. So, she doesn't have it in her heart to refuse them since they're also important to her. Because they haven't been seeing much of her lately, they're bound to miss her and want to spend some time together with her. The guy must be lost in his own thoughts to not pay attention to where he's going. It's good that he at least apologized when Taeyeon demanded it from him. She seemed to have gotten him taken aback with her outburst.

Typos:

The door bell rang 3 times and I quickly ran to the front door hoping to see Myungsoo Oppa.
Corrections: doorbell; three

I'm not falling inlove with Myungsoo!
Correction: in love

While walking, I bumped into a orange-haired guy.
Correction: an

Chapter 10: It's random that you inserted yourself into the story. Myungsoo really has a soft spot for Taeyeon to give in to her easily. He's willing to do anything to make her happy, which can be a weakness when that's used to her advantage. The day that she'd treat him would probably be for a special occasion (like his birthday). Taeyeon really loves to sing to let go that side of herself. The shirt that she wore in the photo looks beautiful with the bright floral design.

Typos:

"Nooooo! Your'e treat kekekeke~"
Correction: Your
* "You're" is the contraction for "you are."

I looked up the wallclock and it says 12:51 pm.
* The preposition "at" should be added after "up."

But Im lying on my bed, thinking of you again!
Correction: I'm

Chapter 9: Taeyeon is scared to fall in love again because of the heartbreak that she'd experienced from Jiyong. Her heart now beats for him, but she's in self-denial about her feelings. There's never been a time in her life when Myungsoo has done anything to hurt her. He's always been there for her, so he's trustworthy. The love that he has for her is pure. It's fear getting the best of her. That's why she couldn't find it in her heart to accept him. This proves that she isn't completely over Jiyong to still be emotionally affected by him. Myungsoo is different from Jiyong, so it won't make sense for her to compare him to her ex. If Taeyeon would give Myungsoo a chance and let him into her heart, then he'd help cure her of the pain.

Lauren is one cute kid. Because of her presence, the mood seems to have lightened up. The girl's words seems to have given Taeyeon a little assurance. She somehow got Myungsoo to indirectly reveal his feelings toward Taeyeon. Her mother could be right about the two being suited for each other.

It is cute to imagine Myungsoo pouting like a kid who hasn't gotten his wish fulfilled.