The Flaws in all of Us

Description

               

 

                             " Words affects more than action"

                                              that's what she believes in

                                                   " Everything happens for a reason"

                                                     that's what he had to believe                    

                                                    " Stay strong because you're worth it"

                                                      and that's what they said.

 

 

             

 

 

 

 

                 

Jayzayy's note : THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH FOR READING MY FIRST EVER FANFIC.

 I REALLY DO HOPE YOU ENJOY IT, AND PLEASE DO COMMENT.  ^^

If some of you might have noticed, the title that i use for each chapter i did was mainly all from

BIGBANG'S SONGS. (FOREVER A VIP YO!!!) and at the beginning of each chapter there will be 'letter's to Maya', 'Confessions of a..' and 'Whatssapp with them.' It's just a short bit's of stories relating to all of them, so it's nothing much but I hope u'll enjoy them though. :)

 

Foreword

 

          "Please don’t  leave me,” I woke up screaming and yelling his name frantically in the darkness. There it was, again my nightmares of him had come back, to haunt me in my dreams. I took deep breaths, trying to maintain my breathing, as I slowly calm down. Then, I cried out loud. Only my bewildered sobs and cries filled the entire room. “I didn’t, you made me to.. How could you Seunghyun?”I said in sobs, my heart was aching with much pain. Then, I slowly recalled back what happened a few months ago.

 

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   HER POV :                                                                                                                    

 

          “I don’t want pain any more — any more than this.                          

                                                               But at this moment, It is you, whom I love so painfully.

 

 

                                                  HIS POV :

 

                                                     Missing someone is an agonizing feeling. You feel it with you're whole body.

                                                                                                          Every part.

  The worst part is the aching in your chest. The never-ending feeling. The feeling you're missing

Something imoprtant.

Then, there's the worrying about how to cope without what was so crucially important to you.

I suppose, the only think to do, if you cannot replace that person, is to fill the empty hollowness that conumes you. 

To start again.

 

 

                                                   THE THIRD PERSON POV : 

                                                                          

     ' YOU HAVE MY HEART '

                                       YOU ALSO HAVE THE BREATH CAUGHT IN MY LUNGS,                                   

     EACH BONE IN MY SPINE, EACH BONE IN MY BODY.

      EVERY MUSCLE ACHES AND SURGES WITH YOU.

     YOU HAVE SO MUCH THAN MY HEART.

      'YOU HAVE EVERYTHING THAT KEEPS ME ALIVE, EVERYTHING'

 

 

 

                   

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topwife #1
OMG! Fall in love with your stories already..
i dont know how to comment tho. Cause i think your story moves my heart. The fact that you use the name Maya..i love it! Waiting for so long for someone writing fic using that name.(its not my name.kkk)
Bartholomeow #2
Chapter 32: OMG please update soon! I'm in love with your story already! ^_^
_gdragonnnnn #3
Chapter 31: Story is a little bit confusing... Too many flashbacks?.__. But all in all I enjoyed it :) keep writing and please let them reconcile soon! T_T
IRAbpholic
#4
Chapter 29: whoaaa...i'm reading this story non-stop from chap 1 till the current chap....
my comment??
the story line is good enough to attract readers like me.. :D
keep updating this story...
*i love how you describe seungri's role in this story,,that suits him well..#he's my bias,, sorry...
and for seunghyun,, i really hope he'll get Maya back...TT.TT ,,
*r you malaysian???same here..ohohoho..
sorry for the long comment...too excited..
jayzayy
#5
Thanks to my silent reader(s)
:)
lovis89 #6
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! she could tame the beast within Seunghyun. i love this line
jayzayy
#7
to my subscribers, thank u (bows-9o')
i will continue on to work hard for u guys,
thank u.... :")
jayzayy
#8
please, feel free to leave a comment, i want to know how u all feel about my story or maybe i need to improve more? anyhow, thank u.. :)
jayzayy
#9
OMG, thank u for subscribing to my story, i feel soo happy.. :)
and thank u for reading my first ever fanfic, still a rookie though.. thanks sooo much.. :')
lovis89 #10
yb likes maya...