Echoes of Eternity

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  Their story began when they were only nine years old.

That summer, she had made a promise which she couldn't keep.

Her life was predestined; there was a time limit.

 

Let their story unfolds now.

 

Foreword

 

"For those who love, time is eternity."

ft Krystal Jung, Kim MyungSoo, Im Yoona

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e-ter-ni-ty/iˈtərnitē/ 

  1. Infinite or unending time.

2.  A state to which time has no application; timelessness.

 

 

 

 

 

Tears, sweat, and laughter, with a faint whiff of innocence.

Their never-ending love story.

 


A/N: 'Echoes of Eternity' is an one-shot story that promises to bring you a smile, a tear and most importantly, hope. Lastly, please enjoy reading the story! Special thanks to Levunnie @ Hurrican Storm for the amazingly beautiful poster! 

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winspiritbeauty
#1
Chapter 2: This is beautiful!
ItsjustLlama
#2
Chapter 2: This Sounds Like A Japanese Manga I Read Before....I Love The Manga Better Then The Movie.:D
hyolens
#3
So I was browsing through a few myungyoon stories and came across this.
You have no idea how much I cried at the end. Like seriously, my parents thought I had a mental issue or something.
But anyway, you are seriously a gifted writer, I will say.

Now I'll just be completely honest. I really haven't found a good story in so long, I didn't have high standards or anything for this story and I somewhat lost all hope in any good authors for the tags I look through. When I first read it, I thought this story would be like any other story but then as I kept reading, I fell more in love with everything, every detail and of course the characters.
I could go on and on about how much I loved this story, but I'm sure you don't wanna waste your time. I'll just finish and say you seriously are one of the best writers here.
yoonda #4
Chapter 2: omo.... this story make me cry... :'( so beautiful. and touching.... but i'm confused it's yoona???
Rini6189
#5
Chapter 2: Somehow, things ended up well. It's like a miracle had happened and gave them another shot. That's a nice ending to the hardships that the two went through.

The Myungstal is one-sided. It doesn't seem plausible that they'd end up together because his heart's already taken by Yoona. I think this makes sense ending up as a MyungYoon fic. The scene at the end reflects what Yoona stated as her wish in the letter written for Myungsoo. Plus, the girl seems to resemble Yoona--being cheerful, energetic, and radiating innocence. Even though the woman's name is left out, it sounds like Yoona since I'm familiar with her character in this fic to be able to determine that. To end up that way, God must've answered Myungsoo's prayer and blessed him with Yoona as his wife.

Love never dies. It can only grow stronger with time. This must be why it gives one a sense of eternity when he/she experiences this sensation. It also gives one hope to live on and endure/overcome difficulties. Yoona is an inspiration here for not giving up on herself despite her condition. She continues to be optimistic and not think negatively of herself. One shouldn't be held back by his/her limits to keep them from giving it their best at things.

Despite the sadness, it's endearing to see Yoona and Myungsoo have their lovely moments together. It's one of those fics that gives its readers mixed feelings. You managed to express the emotions well. By reading through it, I feel as though I'm connected to the characters. It's like taking a walk in their shoes and experiencing what they're feeling.

The quote, "For everything you gain, you'll lose something else," makes me think of the harsh reality of life. People win some and lose some. Things don't always turn out the way that one wants. Life has its ups and downs. We all suffer one way or another. Losses can teach people lessons in life through experience. One can learn even more from losing rather than winning.
Rini6189
#6
Chapter 2: Myungsoo and Yoona seem to complement each other well being opposites. It sounds kind of sweet of Myungsoo to say to Yoona, "I will stay with you even though you like to kick me in your sleep." xD The part about him getting her to eat what she considers gross as medicinal remedies to help her recover faster seems silly. It's amusing to see him as an innocent kid being curious to look up different remedies to help cure Yoona and taking on the role of a doctor. The first kiss that she gives him under the stars is sweet and full of assurance. It did soothe him because of the love that he could feel from her that gives him a sense of comfort knowing that she'll be by his side. The love that they have for each other is beautiful. Krystal seems antagonistic because of her attempt in getting Yoona and Myungsoo to push away from each other. Even though she cares about Myungsoo ending up being miserable from losing Yoona because of the close bond that they share, she sounds cold about it. So, it sounded like she's being selfish rather than taking his feelings into consideration. For her to not understand him, she must've not experienced that sensation. He is mature for taking it calmly. Even though he's a man of few words, he does leave an impression with his reactions/actions. Because of love, he doesn't let that hindrance get to him and remains positive. It is saddening of Yoona to be reminded of her ill fate as though it's taking away any hope that she has in herself. Yoona is mischievous to put up that act just so she could get a kiss from him. She still hasn't lost her childishness despite her age. Since she did make him worry a great deal with her little stunt, he felt the need to scold her about it--that it's not something to joke about. It's hard for Myungsoo when Yoona's in a critical condition. Having one's loved one taken away from him/her is a pain that can't be compaed to any other. Being left alone is a depressing and lonely thing.
loveydovery
#7
Chapter 2: This so amazing and sad and perfect at the same time. I'm not even a shipper and I took a random shot at reading Myungyoon/Myungstal. My heart hurts a lot but this is really so beautiful and your writing is so addictive. It keeps me reading and reading. Even when it's over, I wanted more. This is more than beautiful ♥
dark23456 #8
Chapter 2: I love it.. It's making me cry.. I have a very strong feeling that the wife is Yoona.. Love it! :')