Chapter 4: ...I just reread this and it was so cuteeee~ sorry to spam your comment box LOL XD
I have to say that Chen is a troll here too, even in all his fairy-ness. xD (loldisregardthatthatwasmebeingstupid) But anyways. I loved how you wrote the story almost like an epic, kind of starting in the middle and telling the story with flashbacks and stuff. I think it's kind of hard to pull off but you did it quite nicely, and the Krishan was so adorable I wanted to throw the computer and squeal. XD
It's okay, cheesy is AWESOME! XD
I'm a little sad to see this story go since I've had so much fun reading it. :P But HEY, it was all UBER adorable cause KrisHan and it had a happy ending and it was still pretty darn beast! :D definitely on of my favorites! You did a wonderful job ^_^ Even though it's shorter than I expected, I'm glad it ended the way it did! :P
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