Imperfection

Description

Yixing is happy with what he has. He loves everything about what he does. 

He starts to love it all everything even more when Lu Han appears, a loud neighbor with a tendency to speak with his entire body.

Then reality strikes.

 

Written for the Blinded by Words Writing Challenge. (Won first place in the category thank you all so much!)

 

Oneshot

Prompt: Everything's just perfect.

Word count: 4,326

Foreword

A/N: I feel like I did it wrong. Like I interpreted the prompt wrong.

I guess, if you look at it from a sarcastic point of view, it works?

Anyway, you would make me the happiest girl in the world if you could read and/or leave a comment. Nice or critical. I don't mind. I'm tough, I can take it. :)

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HzLicious #1
Chapter 1: Aww. . .i was like siting in my chair,gasping for air because this is too much until i can't handle it.i didn't expect this story to became like this.but OH MY GOD, , ,you did it.you sure deserved the first place.your story was somewhat i called excellent.i really got surprised with the way you describe yixing-perfection-world. . .but in the end. . .you crashed it down.i didn't expect that yixing have a problem with his ear.now i understand why he acted like that in company's meeting.i feel so bad for him.and the way he refused to play guitar because of his memmory.he used to be a musician,aren't he?

I was like whoaa. . .thats why he loves luhan.because luhan isn't only speak with his mouth but with his hand and body. . .


This is awesome!congratulation authornim.
wow_fantastic_baby #2
Chapter 1: This story had such an artsy feel to it, like I was seeing a piece of art rather than reading a simple story. I think what you've written is gorgeous and you definitely deserved 1st place. :)
eudaimonia #3
Chapter 1: this is so sad ;A;
I didn't realize yixing has hearing disability through out this story asdkdja
isiss1994 #4
Chapter 1: Well written, but it made me sad that he couldn't hear LuHan's beautiful voice.
hae_ki #5
it's really beautifully written. ;_;
phantom_erik13 #6
But I did really like the parts with the dolls. :)
phantom_erik13 #7
You make me sad. :( Esto es no bueno.
SillyAh #8
Celia R loved life.
She loved Tumblr.
She loved AFF.
But most of all she loved this story.
It was perfect.

Hannah is bright.
Hannah is cheerful.
Hannah is a freaking amazing writer.
And Celia loves it.

Beautiful story, even if I have never thought about shipping LayHan. Your writing is too beautiful makes mine look like crap ;A; And the ENDING. It was sad but it makes it beautiful ;A; BRB CRYING.
Shirahime #9
I demand a sequel. With a happier ending. =P

Good story, cute until it all came crashing down painfully at the end... ;_;
Minnietvxq17 #10
So Lay lost his hearing right? And this whole time he was reading people's lips.
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