Kindled Heart

Description

 

You're odd.
I'm even.
We seem lost in translation.
 
 
~4k words
 
 
(Alternatively: Celia wrote a poem and I wrote a fic because ap euro and drama mv. Also I don't know anything about medieval europe and I'm going to fail my test hahahah OTL)
 
(Psst, your turn, Tayler)
 
 

Foreword

 

“Jongin.”

He’s struck by the smooth voice, something he was not expecting, so Jongin doesn’t respond at first. The boy frowns and repeats the words, Jongin’s name rolling off his tongue like honey. Finally, Jongin snaps to and nods. “Jongin,” he points to himself, agreeing.

“Zitao,” the boy states, pointing to himself.

 

 

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zepian #1
Chapter 1: Absolutely beautiful. I just love the transition from annoyance to fondness to love. AND YES JONGIN STANDING BACK AND SIMPLY ADMIRING THE BEAUTY THAT IS ZITAO. Their cuteness :3
MissBunnyGyu #2
Chapter 1: SEQUEL PLEASE!
arianapetrova #3
Chapter 1: sequel? you're amazing sweetie, it feels like the past, since they haven't learned countries and everything, so beautiful
lemon-deulop #4
Chapter 1: He learned how to say ZITAO~~ That's so sweet. I just can't contain all the love I have for this. It's amazing, just how everything seems so realistic... Even when those times were a while back. It seems so current too... Like I'm not writing this onto INTERNET. Woah. I loved this~

Thank you <333
SillyAh #5
JFC
YOU USED MY CRACK POEM AND MADE SOMETHING NICE OUT OF IT BLESS YOU
oh-tea-twelve #6
Chapter 1: homg this was really beautiful i really love it c::
its really realistic and i like how zitao slowly opens up to jongin and jongin is secretly whipped by zitao ugh so adooooorbs ¦:3333
it was cute how jealous!jongin got annoyed with wufan and zitao's sudden closeness ugh and the cheek!kiss sigh so lovely<3
im glad wufan was there as taokai's supporter and also he was there to knock some sense back into jongin >¦:D
jongin getting green and cranky with heartbroken teary zitao as a result >¦:[
prince/warrior/muscly-man!zitao came to save princess!jonginnie's ::D
and his words which was taught by wufan was probably along the lines of "i love you please forgive this sorry loser" right? xD it was cute tho to see jongin became frantic and rushed to wufan for guidance since he cant read c::
aaah the kiss was ugh perfect ugh my hearteu so much feels i cant sobs
THANK YOU A WHOLE BUNCH!~ I really enjoyed reading this<3
<3<3<3

(i hope too see more taokai from you in the future ¦:333)
icecreamninja94
#7
Chapter 1: How do you write such amazing things? I don't- how???