Tell Me Your Wish

Description

     At the top of his class, Mabarry's Octavian Private Secondary School’s scholarship student Huang ZiTao lives an extremely normal and rather boring life. Though he has no complaints, he isn’t happy either – he’s “fine.” Blindly driven, Tao works diligently but doesn’t know toward what.
     In need of money, he takes up a well paying tutoring job over the summer before his senior year in high school. Tao tutors Xi Aekyung, a quirky and spontaneous girl who immediately takes a liking to Tao when she first sets her eyes upon him. Aekyung becomes determined to make Tao happy and slowly adds more color to his life, helping him discover his dreams and aspirations.
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Story inspired by the lyrics of the song “Tell Me Your Wish (Genie)” by Girls’ Generation. (Almost) every chapter will be based off a song’s lyrics and/or feel. Written in different POVs.

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Characters –


Huang ZiTao, 18:

` scholarship student, top of his class
` cautious/not a risk taker (aka a "scardy cat"), mellow/non-competitive, realistic (almost pessimistic), sometimes sassy&bitter
` diligent, gets the job done and doesn’t give up easily (emphasize “DILIGENT”, not “smart”)
` does not want to be romantically nor ually involved with anyone
` from a middle class family
` organized, frugal
` “theme song”: Falling – John Park

 

Xi Aekyung (Xi AiJing), 17:
[` nearly the opposite of Tao]
` musical, artistic
` big dreamer, happy nature/happy-go-lucky, adventurous
` altruistic, loves to make friends/meet new people, naïve
` see humorous side of situations (laid back), can laugh at her own mistakes
` quick temper but quickly&easily forgives
` born into wealthy family, homeschooled (private professionals) since 8 years old
` lack of system – disorganized, doesn't know how to budget money
` “theme song”: Jump Then Fall – Taylor Swift

 

Park Chanyeol, 18 (for this fic lol):
[` similar to Aekyung]
` regular student
` from well-off family but is down to earth
` extremely optimistic person, always has a smile on
` loves helping and being around children, deeply values family and friends, grateful
` enjoys exploring and discovering new things
` if angered has a scary side, protective
` “theme song”: Love Rain – Kim Taewoo

 

Kim Mia, 18:
[` similar to Tao]
` also a scholarship student,
` intelligent but a little clueless/klutzy, weak&scrawny, careful
` the girl-next-door feel, the nerd girl, goody-two-shoes personality
` in Tao’s eyes, the most “normal” person on campus -> enjoys her company

Kris, 18 (for this fic OwO):
` scholarship student for basketball
` urges Tao to throw out the books and go enjoy life
` person Tao goes to for advice, cares for Tao, older brother figure (“ge”)
` good with girls but isn’t interested in having a girlfriend
` cocky in a dorky way (-__-)
` relaxed, unworried
` “theme song”: y Free & Single – SJ (L O L.)

Kai, 18:
` regular student
` born with a silver spoon in his mouth, believes everything can be solved with money, superficial
` smooth with girls, the player of the school
` arrogant, self-centered, over confident at times
` charlatan
` enjoys teasing others
` “theme song”: Oh! – SNSD

(Xi) LuHan, 21:
` Aekyung’s overly protective older brother
` Thinks he knows what’s best for his baby sister
` Clever and devious

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Lyrics: Genie [I suggest at least scanning this], Falling, Love Rain, y Free & Single

Foreword

Hey :3 This is my first fanfic orz;; this idea has been floating around in my head for the past coupla months omFG Criticism/advice is warmly welcomed. C:

***PS.  the last time I wrote a story was at least 8 years ago so I’m sorry if this at first; gotta get all the rust off looool. like I said, advice/criticism welcomed. I want to improve so people can enjoy reading and I can enjoy writing as well. Win-win, yes? *u* Unfortunately, I don’t effortlessly write in an incredible prose and come up with ingenious ideas in a snap like a lot of the authors on AFF but I promise I will give this my best! X3

PSS. I have a huge thing for songs with – imo – good lyrics, lol.

PSSS. This took me 5 days to brainstorm and 7 hours (+ 1st chapter) to type up n edit. [I’ve been sitting infront of my computer for hours omfg my eyes T__T].. see what I’m talking about rusty AHAHAHA.

bobblyhead
for ch3 it says there're sound fx's but I need to make them first. I'll update the sounds along with ch4 later today. I only have 5min left on the computer :(

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000521
#1
Chapter 2: I LOVE THIS
ParkYeollie
#2
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Nalabob06
#3
Yay! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!