I LOVE YOU!!!

I LOVE YOU!!!

NO ONE POV

Taeyeon & Infinite was talking until Taeyeon forgot to go to her class...

KRINGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!.....

 

TAEYEON POV

OMO!!!!!...ottokhae???!!!....o.O..i forgot about the class!!!!....><

Aigoo!!!.....pabo Taeng!!!....seriously forget..><"

Taengoo..gwaenchanha??..the Infinite asked me..

ahh..nae..just..i forget about my class!!!...><...huhu...now its time for everyone to go back to their home...i need to copy the notes....><..i need to go home now...see you guys tomorrow..

Annyeong..

nae..annyeong..Infinite say to me..

I just leave the Infinite behind...its already 3 pm...I need to go to market to buy some groceries..to many works to do..

after i buy some groceries..i walk to go home..but..there are something stopping me to go home..i heard there is a kid crying at the bench in the park..

i noticed that he is alone...i walk near to him...i asked him...

Annyeong...why are you crying little kid??...where is your omma & appa??..

then he hug me...he said while crying..

Omma leave me here..she hate me..Appa is dead 3 months ago....Omma said that she want to buy me a juice...she asked me to play while she go buy it for me....Then she leave me...

i just want to cry..but i hold it..i hug the kid..

Suddenly he asked me..

Noona..can you be my Omma??..i dont have anyone now...*he make his puppies eye*

i cant say no to him..because i know how he feel right now..then i say YES...

Nae...so..what is your name?

Kim Jungshin..Omma can call me Shin..^^..Omma promise me dont leave me...

he hug me...

nae..i hug him back..

Lets go buy a juice...

nae Omma..

*he is holding my hand...im so happy...his hand to small..*

 

TAEYEON AND JUNGSHIN POV

Shinnie..what flavour do you want??..

APPLE!!!....^_^

waa....same as Omma...

jeongmalyo??

nae..^^..*i pinch his cheek*

miss...give me two apple juice..

 

NO ONE POV

Taeyeon and Shin walking to Taeyeon house..

Taeyeon was so happy because she will not leave alone now...she was so happy because Shin will stay by her side..

But...she doesnt want her friend to know about this..so she keep as a secret..

One day,she will tell her friend about Jungshin...

*sorry,its really short..><

 

 

 

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Rini6189
#1
Chapter 11: A writer's block is normal for authors when they're unsure how to proceed with the story or running out of ideas. So, you can go back to this story when you have more ideas of how to continue this and develop Taeyeon and Myungsoo's relationship.
Rini6189
#2
Chapter 10: Myungsoo must really be pleased with the situation he landed himself into, even to play along when a server commented about them as a family. Jungshin is the glue that brings them closer together. The kid's sharp for his age to come to that conclusion about Taeyeon's feelings. It'll be interesting to see how things will develop for the potential couple.
Rini6189
#3
Chapter 9: Myungsoo is nice to offer Taeyeon a ride and to be willing to take Jungshin home when he seemed to not have a parent come for him. It's like the budding of a family for the three of them to have a meal together.

It should be pelled Cheek" instead of "chick" since it's referring to a spot on the face where she's being kissed.

The pictures aren't visibly shown. They must've been deleted or removed from the sites where you found them.
Rini6189
#4
Chapter 8: This is a sweet time of connection shared between Myungsoo and Taeyeon. Once an understanding has been reached, there can be a change of mind/heart. Taeyeon must be that special girl to have quite a good impact on Myungsoo for him to come out of his shell.
Rini6189
#5
Chapter 7: Shin is so considerate to think of Taeyeon's well-being. That's demonstrating mental flexibility in his approach to the situation. The wall seems to have been breached for Myungsoo to open up to Taeyeon about his sadness and despair. This somehow changes things between them.
Rini6189
#6
Chapter 6: This gives a little background info to explain Myungsoo's attitude towards girls in general. That's sad. Still, it is fruitless to keep going through life like this. He won't find true happiness by continuously letting himself get stuck in the past.
Rini6189
#7
Chapter 5: Taeyeon's fortunate to have such good friends willing to lend a hand when necessary. It shows their consideration towards her. It's good that they're being understanding of her situation.
Rini6189
#8
Chapter 4: At least Taeyeon's handling the responsibility of a mother alright by taking in Jungshin. She really is looking out for him. Finding a good nursery can be a challenge.
Rini6189
#9
Chapter 3: It's sad that the mother decided to abandon the child. Good thing that Taeyeon happened to be there at the time to check on him. It seems like a blessing for her to take him in.
Rini6189
#10
Chapter 2: All the guys, except Myungsoo, are being warm and friendly with Taeyeon. She's helpful as the student body president in guiding them through the process of school registration. It's kinda funny that she gave Myungsoo quite a hard time when he got in her face about doing what he wanted out of her. He does give off an arrogant vibe to keep smirking at her.

It doesn't make sense for Taeyeon to be referring to Sungyeol, Woohyun and Hoya as "Oppa" when they're the same age as her. That honorific is intended for guys that are older than the girl.