♔ The Pink House ✰ {REVIEWS} ✰ -[Busy//Accepting]- ♔

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Welcome to The Pink House of Reviews!

 

The place to shop for high-quality review requests!

Hello dear reader and welcome to the house! If you have been searching for a place to find meticulous and detailed reviews, then look no further. Jessica and Brendan are here to provide quality critiques of any and all pieces of writing, quickly and efficiently. If progressing as a writer is your key concern, then you have most certainly come to the right place! The two of us have great experience as writers and therefore know exactly what advice will be helpful.

Requesting is officially open, so please don't hesitate!

 

Opened officially - 08/07/2012
Name changed/Request form modified - 08/08/2012

 


STATUS

~ OPEN ~ BUSY ~ CLOSED ~ REVAMP ~

(Clearing pending list. request now and you may be waiting a long time.)

**Requests will be accepted whilst the shop status is high-lighted 'OPEN' or 'BUSY'.
**Request made whilst 'BUSY' may take longer than quoted.
**Requests made whilst 'CLOSED' or under 'REVAMP' will be declined.


CONTENTS
 

Forward: Status/Rules/Format for Requests

Chapter 1: Introduction to Jjin and Bren - click here -

Chapter 2: Completed/Pending/Declined Reviews - click here -

Chapter 3: Featured Stories - click here -

Chapter 4 & Onwards: Completed Reviews - click here -


 

 

 

Foreword

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"Boys to your left, girls to your right. For everything else, carry straight on."


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RULES

1 \\ Please subscribe to this thread if you are submitting a request.
2 \\ Provide working links when asked.
3 \\ Request in the comments below.
4 \\ If pending lists are long, we reserve the right to politely decline a request.
5 \\ If you would like to cancel a request, please do so as soon as possible for our convenience. (Either comment or PM either of us.)
6 \\ If you plan to include our review somewhere in your story, please credit the shop.
7 \\ Failure to comply with the rules will result in a declined request. Consistent failure may result in blacklisting.

 


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REQUESTING

 

- Requesting for a Review -

Please leave a comment containing the following information (copy and paste) :

1. [Title of story]
2. [Working link to  your story]
3. [Author's name]
4. [Is the story finished?/How many chapters so far?]
5. [Is English your first language? Yes/No]
6. [Genre of Story - e.g. Romance/Angst/Fluff]
7. [Type of Story - e.g. Idol-Pairing/Yoai/Yuri/OC/You - Please also specify if the story is rated.]

**NOTE: Rubric of reviews will be explained below.

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**ALL Genres of writing are accepted. /Yuri/ are perfectly fine to request!
We will not discriminate against any story.

 

 

Rubric for Reviews

Title (0/5) - How inventive and eye-catching is the title? Is it relevant for your audience?
Forward/Description (0/10) - Would these make me want to subscribe? Why? Why not?
Plot (0/25) - How captivating was the storyline? Did I want to continue reading? What did I enjoy/not enjoy?
Characterisation (0/15) - Were the characters well-developed and believable?
Flow (0/5) - Was the pace of the story appropriate? Was it easy to read?
Originality (0/10) - Was there something unique about this story? **Note: this is NOT limited to plot.
Grammar (0/20) - Were there many grammatical mistakes? Did this detract from the feel of the story? **Note: It is not our policy to provide lists of grammatical corrections.
Vocabulary (0/10) - Was there a wide and innovative range of word-choices?

Total Score - {--/100}

Ratings of 95+ will be featured in Chapter 3!

 


Thankyou for visiting! We hope you will have fun requesting!
Sincerely yours, JjinYJ + BrenRay
 



 

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AFFILIATES OF THE HOUSE:
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Credit for the wonderful poster goes to ImposedWriter @ ♚ Arts of Royalty {Graphics & Reviews}
 

JjinYJ
{08/08/2012} Name and Request form slightly changed.

Comments

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doubleabs
#1
1.Title of story: Blamed
2.Working link to your story: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/675881/blamed-action-comedy-romance-exo-kris
3.Author's name: doubleabs (real name Breanna)
4.Is the story finished?/How many chapters so far? completed
5.Is English your first language? Yes
6.Genre of Story - action, romance. it may be comedy but I don't know if I succeeded in that
7.Type of Story - e.g. Idol-Pairing/Yoai/Yuri/OC/You - OC and Exo(:

Thanks for reading this!! I hope you accept this request
i_love_me
#2
Hey *waves* I would like to request :D

1. Catch me if you can

2.http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/287311/catch-me-if-you-can-kyuhyun-myungsoo-spy-you-kai-baekhyun-suho

3. Emy

4. It's not finished yet...hmm, I ma planning on writing about 100 chapters

5.No, English isn't my first language

6. action, mystery, spy, fantasy and a bit of school life and romance

7. Idols×OC, rated Story

I would be happy if you would take a look at my story and please take as much time as you need. I prefer BrenRay to review my story...lol I know I don't have the rights to choose :) But I would also be happy if Jessica reviews my story ^.^ Thank you in advance ;)
Ebimelody
#3
1. Our Memories
2. http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/242298/our-memories-angst-kyuhyun-kyumin-sungmin-characterdeath-oneshotkyumin
3. Ebimelody
4. It's finished and it's a oneshot
5. No
6. Angst and a little Fluff
7. Idol-pairing , Kyumin
skullboy #4
1. My Wishes
2. http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/238797/my-wishes-oneshot-yunjae
3. Skullboy
4. Completed
5. No
6.
7. ,Rated
baechimi
#5
1. Tik Tok
2. http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/216165
3. Karen
4. 2 chapters were done and my story has NOT been completed yet.
5. No
6. Detective, Action.
7. Pairing and NOT rated.
Hiirah
#6
PandaDiaries #8
Hello, The Pink House! ^^ I would just like to ask whether it's okay for you to be affiliated with us, Exotic Fairies Review and Graphic Shop? We've only just started, so it is under construction at the moment. :)
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/259024/exotic-fairies-review-graphic-shop-under-con-review

Please let me know if you're interested!
incubus #9
I would like to change my story from Teaching How to Spy to Art of Smiling.
Here is the link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/254179/art-of-smiling-angst-kyuhyun-kyumin-romance-sungmin-superjunior

I hope it isn't a hassle! I think Teaching How to Spy still need improvements which is why I changed it! =D
himalayancat #10
1. Through the Broken Mask
2. http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/224423/through-the-broken-mask-oneshot-exo-luhan-exoluhan-luhanandyou-luhanandoc
3. himalayancat
4. Finished
5. NO
6. Romance, Drama, Slice of Life
7. Idol x OC (Luhan of EXO x OC)