Au Revoir
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Au Revoir
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http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/209415
Au Revoir is the story about two ordinary people, strangers, that both are on their way to meet their birth parents. Fate brought them together and their three hours together relly are beautiful ones. A love story of two people who fall in love at the brink of death.
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Title (5/5)
Comments The title is french for goodbye right? It made me think it was a lovey dovey dramatic story and because the meaning of it is well known, it was a good choice for a title (: after reading the story, it really is perfect.
Description (15/15)
Comments omfg I could not express how perfect the foreword and description is. It gave off an idea of what the story will be like, what the characters are like and where they came from, it gave good information that readers needed to know. And it was very well written, including details and a dramatic style, very nice.
Plot (26/25) (;
Comments OOOOH HOW I WANT TO GIVE YOU A -5 FOR HOW IT ENDED. But this story was so amazing for just three chapters, a surprise twist at the end, I expected that a little, just the tiniest bit, but I'm sure other readers won't. xD I almost cried, this was so beautifully written, I cannot believe it. The plot was so well thought out, the twists were surprising and gave life to the story, and it was just fantastic.
Characters (20/20)
Comments Creative, and their personalities were explained well. You made it seem like they were made for each other and their history was explained well. From the very first time either of them spoke, just by how they talked, I knew what they were like by how you wrote them.
Flow (9/10)
Comments The flow was great, not perfect, but amazing. I think it was just because everything happened in three chapters, but really, when Yoona started crying, that was when I thought tings seemed a little rushed. Only that one little part ^^; Other than that, it was just perfect, everything was played out evenly and at a good pace(:
Grammar (15/15)
Comments Perfect, of course. I liked your use of bold words as well and using French words~
Overall (11/10)
Comments I'm not that big a fan of Exo or SNSD, but this story was just perfect. I don't even know what to say, I almost cried and the twist at the end, I just can't get over that. You had this reader speechless and everything was just beautifully written. You should make a sequel ^o^
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