Chapter 1: Hey yo! I agree with since1999, that line struck and killed me x3 and adding the "you need to dance" part... Smooth :) raaah why did their almost-into-a-kiss moment be ruined?? Haha xD
I like the way you lead up to it though. Especially with the rain and everything.
YOU DESERVE AN AWARD!! SERIOUSLY! This story is really good! It should be on the featred thingy that you see on the home page :) Keep it up!! ^^
Chapter 1: Hey em~ I was re-reading this to satisfy some Taem feels and noticed a bit of a typo.. "It is only after a little while that you realize that yours as become his own" I think the 'as' after 'yours' should be 'has'? :)
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