Your Hidden Side

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Before Super Junior release their 4th album, "Bonamana", SME let Heechul
joined them. As expected, all the members are welcoming, especially their leader,
Leeteuk.
Of course, as a leader, he needs to welcome every member that joins them
and make them feel rather comfortable.

But what Heechul didn't expect was that Leeteuk has some other
things in his mind. And he's sure that he won't be fully welcomed if 
what Leeteuk is doing will continue.

However, what if things turn upside down... and all the
things Leeteuk did will come back to him?
 


 

Foreword

Ok now, I first want to say something regarding the poster.
erm, well as you can see, I really really, I mean REALLY lack knowledge about Photoshop :|
I don't have any clue in using it...
>.>
So please, let it be.. xD 
But I'm proud of it honestly... hahaha :D

Next is this story MIGHT not have any .
As of now, I don't do those, 'cause simply I don't know how to write it.
Sorry for making you expect any because of the description above... but really, there is none.
But maybe, I'll change my mind and try writing some... so yeah... :DDD

Another one is, this story MIGHT be posted in Leeteuk's POV... means in FIRST PERSON.
but I think occasionally, I will change POVs and some chapters will be in THIRD PERSON.
Depends on how I feel. xD

And last one, this is my VERY FIRST STORY.
Of course, comments and subscriptions are highly appreciated.. :DD
They are my life and it keeps me going...
HELPFUL Criticisms are accepted too... Mind you, MY FIRST STORY. xD
So please do not expect anything that is out of a beginner's reach. 
Mistakes and grammatical errors can be seen here and there... so in advance, I apologize.
*bows*

 

Ok, that's the end of my rant xD
enjoy the story ^^

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MissIdash #1
Did you give up on the story? ._.
teukchulshipper #2
Chapter 3: update please... i like ur story...
ejane1004 #3
please update i really like this story..whats next ?
Aki_Hikari #4
I like what Leeteuk did in their room. He should do more next time xD It's obvious that his attracted to Heechul.
And here... Is it Heechuls skin ship? Hahaha poor boys. He loves it xD
MissIdash #5
Chapter 3: They are not used to the almighty Heenim and his skin ship XD Gonna be fun! XD
MissIdash #6
You are welcome o.o

Chapter 2: Omigod! Eeteuk ____s Heechul! Or... Not XD Haha, Teukie is a dork XD
Angel110 #7
What is Heechul doing now?:oWant to know it, please update:))
babywoob #8
OMG! Teuk, what r u doing? You just met heechul for the first time and you did something like that O_O but i wonder what would teuk do after that, anyway i like it. Update soon kkkk
MissIdash #9
I like it o.o

If there is one thing I would change, it was to break the lines when a new person says something. So that instead of this:
“What did you say, Hyung?” Sungmin asked. “A new member is going to join.” I repeated despite the effort to do so but it’s still barely a whisper. “What?” Kangin asked annoyingly. “Hyung, please speak louder or else we won’t be hearing each other.” I inhaled deeply, gathering all the strength before saying it once more. “I said, A.NEW.MEMBER.IS.COMING.” I emphasized the words and it took all my gathered strength to not yell at them. I don’t why I am so angry, or rather, why I am so worried. I just assume it’s because of the stress I’m feeling right now. In hopes that I will calm down tomorrow and just be happy in welcoming the new member, I stood up, bid good night to the members and proceeded to my room.


You get this:

“What did you say, Hyung?” Sungmin asked.

“A new member is going to join.” I repeated despite the effort to do so but it’s still barely a whisper.

“What?” Kangin asked annoyingly. “Hyung, please speak louder or else we won’t be hearing each other.”

I inhaled deeply, gathering all the strength before saying it once more.

“I said, A.NEW.MEMBER.IS.COMING.”

I emphasized the words and it took all my gathered strength to not yell at them. I don’t why I am so angry, or rather, why I am so worried. I just assume it’s because of the stress I’m feeling right now. In hopes that I will calm down tomorrow and just be happy in welcoming the new member, I stood up, bid good night to the members and proceeded to my room.
fifisukidesu #10
I like thefirst chapter alrd!:) about what points of view you shld use, i guess it entirely depends on the situation...u might want to consider switching between leeteuk‘s pov n heechul‘s pov...anyways jus a suggestion. keep writing!
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